Not a Chapter: II

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Moi: So, my sister, Craftedbird, redrew Nuriazi and I have to say... IT IS SO MUCH FREAKIN' BETTER THAN THE ORIGINAL ONE I SHOWED YOU GUYS.

Moi: *sniff sniff* Why is mah sister always bettah dan meh? *sniff sniff*

Crafted: Because I am.

Moi:   :c

Moi: Oh well, enough moping around. Here's the redraw!

Moi: SHE LOOKS SOOOOOO MUCH BETTERRRRRRRRRRRR! Like, she doesn't have those weird curves and she looks more like an animal than a Pixar-style female creature

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Moi: SHE LOOKS SOOOOOO MUCH BETTERRRRRRRRRRRR! Like, she doesn't have those weird curves and she looks more like an animal than a Pixar-style female creature. Crafted also changed her talons to look more snowy owl-like.

Moi: So basically, I was sitting around the dining table, my sister on the family computer, and I was drawing Nuriazi. And I was drawing her perfectly fine—or so I thought. Then my sister was like: Oh, no no no no. That needs some MAJOR CHANGES. Then she grabs my paper and starts changing Nuriazi up. Giving her a less feminine look and a more natural hunting posture. 


Moi: bruh she hasn't drawn in ages and she's still better than me...


Moi: or maybe its because we have different drawing styles


Crafted: Whaddaya think Midnight? Whaddaya think?

Moi: I knew u were gonna say dat.

Crafted: Then why did you-... oh nevermind.



Moi: Crafted is mah editor and spices up mah story. U should go see the story she is working on. SHE IS ABSOLUTELY SO TALENTED AT WRITING AND I'M SO BLAND. Her story is called "Broken Horns – Remastered!" and it is based off of the game Niche – a Genetic Survival. SO GO CHECK IT OUT AND VOTE, ADD IT TO YOUR LIBRARY–

Crafted: Hol' up hol' up hol' up. HOLD UP ONE DIDDLY DARN SECOND RIGHT THERE.

Moi: waht?

Crafted: THAT IS WAY TOO MUCH PRESSURE. I haven't even started the second chapter!

Moi: but u have the old version, and it's good!

Crafted: No, it's not. The whole reason I'm rewriting that story is because I wasn't satisfied with how it came out.

Moi: o... but i saw teh chapters u haven't published yet!

Crafted: You aren't to share that with the public! THAT IS CONFIDENTAL INFORMATION!

Moi: okay let's tell them about the backstory–

Crafted: Say anything about the Yakistini's origins and I will FRENCHBRAID YOUR NERVOUS SYSTEM. GOT THAT?

Moi: ...ok. o - o'


Crafted: Now leave me be so I can draw Aito.

Readers: Wait who is Aito

Moi: U DON'T NEED TO KNOW ABOUT THAT YET 




Before you say anything—yes, this is was an actual conversation between me and my sister.

Thanks for reading and have a splendid day or night!




























































































okay now I'mma go play Minecraft Bedrock with mah homies

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