Eli stared at the sun as it goes down. He's waiting for his parents to go to sleep so he can sneek out. He hears the light switch off Elli waits ten minutes and then jumps out the window. He lands lightly on his feet and runs up fifth avenue towards the donald bar and club. Eli's 17 but can past for 18 because of how tall he is. Eli's goth. Extremely goth. he wears all black and has black hair and black eyes.
Eli reaches the bar and the door man, Philip, greets him. "hey eli!" "was sup," Eli says. He walks in and takes his usual seat right by the door. "hey lad," says on of Eli's many bar friends. Eli nods his head at him and scans the bar. And then he sees her. Shes wearing all black, a black strap less dress with a flower pinned to the side. And then she motions towards Eli and then to the door Eli pays for his drink, jumps up and runs out the door after her.
Shes lead him into an alley. Eli starts to say"wass-" but she bats him and he goes flying into the wall at the end of the alley. Eli groans. "what the -" "shut up!" she yells at him and smacks him so hard his skull breaks. She then does something insane. She bites him! Eli screams in pain as he feels her sucking his blood. Then another black shape jumps at the girl and their fighting. Eli watches in a haze of fiery pain then eli slowly crawls away and passes out a mile from the scene.
