Moment-Struck

Chapter 1- Flashback

Hi guys!! This is my very first book, I hope you will like it;)
Here is Chapter 1
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Flashback

"Happy Birthday to you!!"
Today is her birthday, and she is now seven years old.This party is just perfect, all her friends and most of her favorite celebrities are here..They all surround her since it was time to blow my candle. She cannot stop thinking about where her parents are, although they said they will be coming. In the meantime, she puts on a brave face for the people around her.

Ring! Ring! Ring!
She was in the middle of making a wish when her phone started ringing...

"Hello mom? Where are you? Everyone is looking for you.." the little girl asks softly.
"Oh sorry honey, I can't come because we have a business trip today and our flight is going to board anytime soon," her mother replied. "Call your dad if he's coming."
"He isn't," the little girl replied quietly, but her mom didn't hear that. "I love you," her mom said, "I gotta go."
Without even waiting for the little girl's reply, she hung up.
That effectively ended all the little girl's enthusiasm for the party.
"Leave me alone now!" she screamed as she threw the phone against the wall.
"Go away! I don't want to see anyone of you again!" she shouted at them.
She left that area because she was holding back her tears since her mom called.A 7 year old girl,celebrating her birthday without her parents was just too much for her to take-in.When she arrived home, she saw something she did not expect.....

"Aahhhhhhh" I woke up from that nightmare I just had.I was sweating and tears just fell out from my eyes.

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