Fan Crush (one direction fanfic)

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Hey guys, this is the first story i've been brave enough to share so i hope you like it but if you don't please don't comment with horrible things as i don't really take harsh criticism well, but feel free to message me or comment with any ideas and i'll be sure to take it on board!  (c:

Zayn's POV                                                                                                                      Chapter one

She just sat there smiling at everything i said, it was like she really listened...it was great! She had big brown eyes and a button nose and these lushes lips, we had met at one of 1D's concerts, she and her crazy best friend had back stage passes so the guys and i all met and talked with them, she treated us like people...it was the first time in almost two years that someone hadn't screamed when they met us.

Her name was Ally, she and i seemed to have alot in common such as we liked singing, acting and goofing around! The concert finished at 8:00pm and somehow Ally and i managed to stay at the concert hall until 22:30pm, She turned to leave but i couldn't just let her go...not like that anyway, I grabbed her arm and offered to drive her home as i was going that way anyway she agreed happily.

Ally's POV

Zayn was amazing, I couldn't believe that i was lucky enough to met him. We talked and talked from eight until half past ten, My mum would be getting worried so i went to the bathroom and told her i wouldn't be home 'till twelve. The way he spoke to me, it felt as if we had known each other forever, My friend:Zoe went crazy when she seen Zayn and the other 1D members approach she screamed....Alot!

Zayn and I seemed to have lots of stuff in common like..how we both plays drums, we both have chocolate brown eyes and we both liked to have fun! I decided i should leave at half ten as i was sure Zayn had better things to do with his time than talk to me..a..a....no one! I started for the door but he pulled me back and refused to let me walk home in the dark,alone as Zoe left half an hour ago, I agreed politely and we set off. We quickly arrived outside my empty house as my mum had left for a business meeting in London at 23:00 and wanted me to text her when i was home, Zayn and i sat in his car for a while before i invited him in as it was late and he looked exhausted.

No one's POV

"Nice place" Zayn said as he looked at all the artistic pictures on the wall "Thanks, my uncle is an artist and he likes my mum to sample his pictures before anyone else lays their eyes on them!" Ally replied, They both made their way into the living room, "take a seat and make yourself comfortable" Ally said kindly, she couldn't help herself but to get lost in Zayn's amazing eyes, "Thanks!" Zayn replied happily, Ally sat down next to Zayn on the cream fabric sofa before turning on the T.V, she flicked through the channels for about two minutes before settling for Glee.

Zayn's POV

Ally had sat down beside me and started watching Glee, I kept noticing that she was struggling to keep her eyes open,

"you okay?" I asked yawning

"Yeah, I'm just really tired" She answered stretching her arms in the air

"Oh, I'll leave if you want?" I asked, only being polite, why the hell would i want to leave a gorgeous girl's house?

"No....it-it's fine" She rushed, suddenly our eyes met and locked on each other, She looked away nervously I put my finger on her chin, gently pushing her head up to face me, i pressed my lips softly against hers, She deepened the kiss, I let my tongue explore her mouth and she done the same, just then the 1D song last first kiss came on the TV (i suggest you listen as you read!) Ally smiled and pulled away "Perfect timing" She giggled, i laughed to before leaning in to kiss her again, My phone buzzed in my pocket, I pulled away and looked at the screen, It was Niall crap he liked Ally and i'd just went all Make out with Malik on her!,

"Hey Ni" I answered

"Hey Zaynie pop, where are you?" he asked

"Errmmm i'm on my way to nandos to pick you up somethin' to eat" I lied

"Okay ,well HURRY with my food please" he demanded politely, he then finished the call.

I stood up and said goodbye before leaving quickly, i had to go to nandos and pick up food for Niall, I couldn't tell him about my kiss with Ally it would hurt him.

I arrived at Nandos about five minutes later, i ordered Niall's favourite which was EVERYTHING on the menu, I paid and left before anyone reconised me, I rushed to Niall's house where we were all staying that week and gave him the huge bag of Nandos.

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Hey people, Sorry still getting the hang of wattpad so be patient with me, comment if you liked it and please don't be hurtful on my comments as this is my first story and i was really nervous to post it for you all!

love you all, from Anna Banana! :D

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