I am going to rewrite the story! With hopefully more interesting scenes and shit.
And an updated page style/layout.
If you do t know what that means then here:
Example:
Old style - One day, the child got to the stand and gave some money to the kind man. He gave her the ice cream and she left. "Thank you!" She said, smiling and skipping along.
Current style -
One day, the child got to the stand and gave some money to the kind man.
He gave her the ice cream and she left.
"Thank you!"
She said, smiling and skipping along.
So, long story short, it is not going to be clumped together and its going to be spaced out.
