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  Hello reader! This is my first book and I wrote this when I was 10, so there may be some plot holes or grammar mistakes... Please tell me what you think about this book and if I should continue! Feel free to suggest anything to this book, believe me, I need help. Thank you for clicking this story and I won't waste your time anymore. 

I tried to ignore Ms. Brook as she explained about Zeus and his brothers. Who knew Oceanus could be defeated and Aphrodite was created from him? Well, I already knew that from before. I wondered how Aphrodite would react to waking up as a mortal and zoned out. Ms. Brook asked, clearly having suspicions that I wasn't listening, "Would you like to answer that Ms. Willliams?" I just stared at her in confusion. 

That's when It hit me that she had asked me a question. I felt the blood rush up to color my cheeks, I asked, "what did you say again?" Ms. Brooks signed, "who is the god of travel In roman? " "Mercury?" my answer came out sounding like a question. Ms. Brook jerked her head at me and asked "what was Prometheus and Pandora's wedding gift?"

My mind came up blank. Ms. brook lifted her chin higher and eyed me carefully. I took a risky chance and guessed "a booox?" stretching out the o. She wasn't giving up. She asked, "and what box exactly Ms. Williams?"

The story came back to me, the only part missing was the name of the box. So that was no use.    just great I thought to myself. As far as I know, It could be the box of pigs. I signed coming to the conclusion that this was hopeless. "the box of Prometheus?" I answered letting the unsureness show in my voice and face. 

Ms. Brooks smiled, which is how I knew I had gotten it wrong. I knew my luck wasn't going to hold out. 

The bell rang, and Ms. Brook dismissed us. The students muttered and talked to their friends as they walked to their locker. "Hey!" I heard someone call behind me. I turned around sharply to be greeted by a black-haired female. "me?" I asked. "Yes, you! who else would I be talking to?" she responded. I don't know maybe one of the tens of people near us? I thought.  "-My name is Carolina!" the female continued. I opened my mouth to respond when a snowball hit both of our heads. 

Looking around, the only person near us was Stephenie, who was walking away from us in a hurry. I grinned from ear to ear as I made a lumpy snowball and threw it at him. 

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"Dripping with snow I grabbed nothing but a banana and a juice cartoon as I sat down at my original spot in the cafeteria. Caroline sat down across from me, shaking her snow-littered hair in my face. I laugh as I lean away from her in an effort to not get wetter, I was already wet enough!

I looked around the cafeteria and noticed a gorgeous female sitting with her friends. They had similar details like all being very slim, very pale, and beautiful. Caroline caught me looking at them and shook her head. "They're the welters. Very gorgeous but they have a stone heart," she said. "I don't know" I replied, "they seem kind enough..." "ahh, they're only kind to each other, something about being related."Dripping with snow I grabbed nothing but a banana and a juice cartoon as I sat down at my original spot in the cafeteria. Caroline sat down across from me, shaking her snow-littered hair in my face. I laugh as I lean away from her in an effort to not get wetter, I was already wet enough!

I looked around the cafeteria and noticed a gorgeous female sitting with her friends. They had similar details like all being very slim, very pale, and beautiful. Caroline caught me looking at them and shook her head. "They're the welters. Very gorgeous but they have a stone heart," she said. "I don't know" I replied, "they seem kind enough..." "ahh, they're only kind to each other, something about being related." 

Coraline suddenly frowned and said "hey, I never got your name." in a disappointed tone. "oh! sorry, my name is Mary" I said in a hurry. She brightened up, but just as quickly her delighted expression changed into shock. 

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