Is it wrong

Prologue

We needed one more touchdown to win the game. I heard my bestfriend call my name. "Bryan I'm open" said Jim
I threw the ball to him and he caught it. Jim is the teams runningback. He ran and ran until he got to the in zone. We all celebrated the win at the new pizza place that just opened not that long ago
I was enjoying a slice then I looked up that's when I saw him.