***NOTE FROM AUTHOR: I am not deleting this story, but I am currently editing it and it'll be awhile before i actually update. Also the reason is because I am busy writing my other book. My apologies!
A/N: I don't mean to make anyone upset by writing this story line. I absolutely do not have anything against Renesmee or Stephenie Meyer's story plot. I just thought about what would happen if the stoy went in another way and i decided to write a story about it. Also I know the first few chapter would be boring, but please bare with me. It'll get better! Please comment/ vote if you like it!
Disclaimer: All rights go to Stephenie Meyer
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I opened my eyes and I saw everything. Literally everything. I could see the little dust particles flying around in the sunlight coming from the nearby window. Every tiny little detail in this massive room I saw clearly as if I was looking through a microscope. Not only was my eyesight incredible but also my other senses. I saw the tiny dew slide off a leaf that was placed in a pot on the middle of a table. I could smell all kinds of things and I could hear everything. The splashes of water from the river about 10 miles away and the sound of different sorts of nature that a human obviously cannot hear.
I looked around and laid my eyes on him. He was smiling but his body was tense and held back. And his eyes weren't the usual warm golden eyes. It was a flat black with purple bruises below them. Nevertheless, excited and overjoyed to see his face again after three long days of agony and pain, I leaped up to him, embracing his unusually normal temperature.
"Edward," I breathed in his scent. He smelled the same, but the scent was stronger this time, "I love you,"
"I love you too Bella," he smiled my favorite crooked smile dazzzling me again
"I would have thought that when I'm more like you, I wouldn't have to worry about being dazzled again, but I was wrong," he chuckled making me feel warm inside, it wasn't like his old laughs, I felt like it has been a long time since he made that sound. Before I could think anymore, Edward's lifted up my chin and pressed his lips onto mine. If I still had a beating heart, it would have absolutely gone wild.
Edward took me hunting and it was liberating, except for the part of almost killing a human, which Edward kept on reminding me on the way that its extraordinary to step away from a situation like that with no help, espicially for a brand new newborn, but I just shrugged it off as if it was nothing. As we neared our home, I quickly remembered something and quickly turned around to face Edward who was right behind my heels. I quickly grabbed his hands and stared at his now amber eyes.
"Renesmee," I whispered eager for an answer. As soon as I said that name, Edward tensed up and his lips went into a straight hard line, furrowing his eyebrows.
"Bella, there's something you need to understand, its normal to be upset, just listen to me," he said after a moment.
"Understand what? Why would I be upset? I need to see my baby," I turned around to head to the house, but was immediately stopped by Edward's hard grasp onto my arm.
"Bella, love, I'm sorry but Renesmee is not here with us," he said and i saw the pain that filled up his face in every word. Confusion burst into me then anger then sadness then confusion again.
"What," I stuttered, "explain to me what you mean.." I finished off unsure of what to do and hoping that certain words wont come out of Edwards mouth. I planted my feet onto the ground and came out of Edward's grasp to fold my arms over my chest.
"Bella," he looked at me in pain and held my face between his hands, "we tried our best but couldn't get Renesmee out of you in time. It was either her or you we were going to lose and one thing lead to the next and..." he stopped not really sure how to finish his sentence.
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