ANOTHER ROAD
by
(DaZtrongo)
January 1,2013
First Draft
FADE IN : EXT. CITY STREETS (AN INDIAN CITY) - NIGHT
CREDIT SEQUENCE.
As OPENING CREDITS play, we study the city's nighttime action, everything seems to be reddish in colour and we hear a soulful violin based MUSIC, mellow and haunting. There is a cruel tone to it, which intensifies as we move on, putting a voice to our story. As CREDITS END, we....
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT.FREEWAY - DAY
Now the MUSIC is GONE, and a CHEERFULTONE fills as the we FOCUS on ERIC,a young man of around age 25, walking through the pavement. He seemed to be in the brightest of moods.He is chattering rapidly through his IPHONE. He is laughing while talking. after finishing talking on the phone, he keeps his phone inside his jeans pocket. He looks toward his left where he sees a LITTLE GIRL of around seven,in a school uniform who seems to be having difficulty to tie her shoelaces. He goes upto her,smiles and then sit down and ties her shoelaces. She looks up at him and smiles a cute smile. He just pattes her head as he move on.He then walks further, when he then takes a sudden left turn as we sees a board in which was written "DTZ ROAD" .
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. DTZ STREET - DAY
We see that this is a narrow street which seems at first to be empty untill we see a movement in a bench located at a far corner of the street.Suddenly there fills an EERIE SILENCE as we see ERIC looking at the two occupants of ther bench.One was an OLD MAN who was scratching his nose as he kept on talking to a LITTLE GIRL of around ten;both dressed in white.The girl was laughing at the OLD MAN'S jokes. ERIC looks at them and then smiles though they were not looking in his direction. HE slowly take something out from his pocket which is not visible to us and before we have time to register anything,we hear TWO SHOTS and we see both the OLD MAN and the GIRL fall down.WE move up close as we see their faces covered in blood,both of them having been shot in their forehead. We LINGER at their faces for a few more seconds when we hear another SHOT (O.S) and everything goes BLACK.
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