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Title: You Must Remember ThisAuthor: @FranklinBarnesStatus: complete Chapters:41Summary: Part political satire, part coming-of-age story, part love letter to the high school English curriculum, You Must Remember This is a postmodern tale depicting...

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Title: You Must Remember This
Author: @FranklinBarnes
Status: complete
Chapters:41
Summary: Part political satire, part coming-of-age story, part love letter to the high school English curriculum, You Must Remember This is a postmodern tale depicting the formative years of a group of teenagers and the broken system around them.

Cover:
The cover it is not as common as all, in this case it is the style that is divided by the usual covers; with a perfect look and full of writing. Personally I think that this is perfect, it has an artistic touch and the simplicity with which it is shown to the reader is in an excellent contrast with the writing, but we will have the opportunity to talk about it between it is not as common as all, in this case it is the style that is divided by the usual covers; with a perfect look and full of writing. Personally I believe that this is perfect, it has an artistic touch and the simplicity with which it is shown to the reader is in an excellent contrast with the writing, but we will have the opportunity to talk about it in a little more depth.

Grammar:
The writing style is sublime, yet fluid and understandable even to a reader who is not native English speaking, spectacularly written and presented,
however I understand that the very long periods of the story can scare and pull back a reader accustomed to short-lived stories.
I have to say that although there are long periods, sometimes heavy to read, they are usually pleasant to read
I really appreciated the initial presentation, he manages to get the reader to form images in his mind and be able to read the book with a film in mind that represents him, ecstatic.
Maybe, a negative point could be precisely these long descriptions That make the story stop, but I understand that it's the first chapter. By the way, it depends a lot on the reader and his preferences, surely, however, I would not know whether to fully recommend this book in front of these huge descriptions, also seen the first and second chapters, depends a lot on the reader and his preferences, certainly.

Example:

This is not only a description, but that's the point

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This is not only a description, but that's the point. However I appreciate the length of the periods, the commas are put in the right places.

Characters:
Written really well, I loved John's introduction, but the thing I liked the most was Mrs. Huang's reaction over the course of Chinese, beautiful.
I almost forgot, good even the trio of the three girls.

Story and themes:
The school is a special place, but the way it is treated and the emotions of the characters make it spectacular. I particularly loved some sentences that the author wrote. Speechless, in a good way.
The reality with which you presented the story makes the characters realistic, and their behaviors... I'm impressed, really.

Example:

I think a lot of people can understand this sentence

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I think a lot of people can understand this sentence.

Summary:
A good book, the reality is prolonged and treated really well. I'm honestly glad I read it for that little bit. You were good, nothing to add.

Final evaluation:
Cover: 8
Grammar:10
Story and themes: 9
Characters: 9
Overall vote: 9

Note:
This is my first review, in case you publish future books and my way of reviewing you liked it, I will be more than happy to read them.

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