This is my first time writing a sasunaru so please give me advice on what I should do with my next story
Naruto's pov
It was Valentine's day and I was walking through the village and a few boys and girls has given me something except one boy has not his name was SASUKE UCHIHA I secretly had a crush on him but no one knew (except me lol) I was walking when I saw sasuke with a box of chocolates In his hands I hoped it was for me.
SASUKE'S POV
Sasuke turned his head to see naruto walking towards him he was so cute ever since the academy accident I've had a secret crush "hey naruto can I talk to you in private?"
NARUTO'S POV
Omg sasuke wants to talk to me in private what do I say? "Sure"
NOBODY'S POV
naru: "so what did you want to talk to me about sasuke?" I wonder what he has to talk about I wonder why he is blushing.
Sasu:you can do this sasuke you are an uchiha "um for some while now I-I've loved you ever since the academy!! So here you go!! *gives chocolate to naruto* please accept!!
Naru:r-really you have *is blushing*
Sasu:yes I have *still blushing*
Naru:well I've loved you since the academy too *takes the chocolates from sasuke*
Sasu:r-really?
Naru:*giggles* yes I have
NOBODY'S POV
Naruto kisses sasukes forehead and that was it sasuke couldn't hold it anymore and grabbed narutos shirt and kissed him on the lips naruto moaning into the kiss sasuke nibbled on narutos bottom lip wanting for entrance which naruto quickly granted sasuke slipping a tongue in their tongues battling for dominance which sasuke won (of course he would win)
Sasu:naruto I love you
Naru:I love you too
So what did you think please remember this my first time doing this so please give me ideas on what to do on my next story