So, I just rechecked the few first chapters, and god, it's horrible lmao. too many typos.
Its one of those moment where you need to do a interview recording and then you listened back to your recording when you want to make a report. The cringe level exceeded 9000
-Oraria in chapter 2 (Where the fck is that)
-Bell Cranell (Who are you lmao)
and many more.
I'm gonna spend my time a bit before moving to new chapters to fix these typos and polishing the first few chapters by adding detail into it.
Have a good weekend!
Progress: for now I re edited and added details till chapter 5 and edited simple grammar, spelling mistake to every chapter. Gonna start writing new chapters
YOU ARE READING
Danmachi IF - What if Alfia survived
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