Hell Born

Take Outs & Extras

Alright this is the last LAST chapter this time, I swear. I know I've bombarded everyone with these last few chapters but since I had them all written, I figured it wouldn't hurt to just put them out.

Since I'm here, I'll say that Seongjoong were my favourite couple to write. Yungi and Jonggyu were a close second. Favourite characters to write? Yeosang and Seonghwa. Hands down. Least favourite? Jinyoung because he's mean to Joong. My favourite chapter is probably between *The Beginning* *The Middle* and *San's Playground*
And I've cried a total of two times writing this book, both because of Yungi. When I was writing their epilogue and when Yunho pulled a peter parker and faded away (probably because it was 5 am and I was emotional)

Anyway...

There are quite a few things I cut, some for a story reason, others because they just didn't fit. But I thought it'd be fun to see how things could've gone!

(Also these are unedited other than grammar mistakes. I didn't try adjusting the syntax or anything so bear with me on a few of these lines)

Also, can someone tell me why I wrote so much Jongsang smut? I'm not gonna show any of it cause oi but like, I'm pretty I wrote more for them than I did for Seongjoong. Make that make sense.

I genuinely apologise for not representing Wooyoung as the bastard he is and in future, I promise to be more faithful to his character. I promise that in my next work I shall do him justice.

ALTERNATIVE ENDING:

First things first, what would I change?

Ummmm

Everything?

Lol no not really. Just the second part of the book. After The Blood Moon saga is where the majority of changes would come in if you ask me. Though I think I'd keep *The Aftermath* and *A Decent Recover* The only thing I think I may change is from the former and probably have it shift to San's perspective and I'll explain why now.

I would keep all external antagonists out. Yeosang and San would've been the driving force of conflict. So say goodbye to Namdevil. Jimin and Jinyoung would probably show up but wouldn't be as focused on much.

San took over Wooyoung's mind at the end of *Don't Worry I'll Hold You* and doesn't do it again successfully. But if I were to rewrite it, I would make it so that he does it several more times after that. Seonghwa and Hongjoong would be reasonably pissed, Joong especially. And Seonghwa's warning about what would happen if he found out about San using his powers comes true.

At the end of *The Aftermath* He would get scared that Wooyoung wouldn't accept his feelings and brainwashing once again, and that's where the cycle begins. Actually, Woo was meant to have several breakdowns during the story and San would "fix" them by altering his memories.

The threat of containment still looms over San unless he rights his wrongs and restores Wooyoung's proper memories. Which he doesn't want to do since Woo would be reasonably upset.

I think if the original draft of what ended up being *Past Promises* ever got finished, their story probably would've gone along those lines.

On the JongSang side, I would've spent more time developing their romance. Yeosang would have still killed Taehyun only this time, Jongho never finds out and forgives him for his transgressions. They would spend more time together and so would the household as a whole.

Yeosang's still a violent asshole who acts without thinking, and the scene I'll show in a bit is how it would have ended. Taemin would stay in the story though since he's Yeo's mentor and would come in the offer some advice or flame his insecurities. In the end, Yeosang would have still been called back to Heaven and Beomgyu still would have come to replace him. Only this time, he and Jongho's relationship would be strictly platonic.