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"what do you think of Sadie?" asks Sasha, her best friend. "i dont really have much to do with her, sadly" i laugh. "so, a little birdie told me she has a crush on you" Sasha hints. "really? or are you joking me?" i asked curiously. "i am dead honest" exclaimed Sasha.
Sadie is a, quiet but outgoing girl. like she's hiding something. she's just one of those chicks you just can't get your eyes off. but Sasha on the other hand, only one word describes her, slut! she's the kinda chick you hate because of her dirty life choices but you talk to her anyway.
"Sadie, want to go out with me sometime?" i ask, hoping. "yes" she sais." "well i'm kinda in a huryy, tonight at 8 babe, i'll pick you up." "babe? settle down hun" Sadie laughs. "haha, you love it!" "cya then" i said.
i roll up in my vt clubsport, i get out. i've walked halfway up the driveway when i hear screaming, crying, swearing coming from Sadies house. i didn't know wether to go to the door or sit in my car. "you can fuck off" Sadies dad screams at me. i left, went home and called her. no answer.
she didnt turn up to school for a week. i was worried to say the least, until the tuesday. she was at school. "i am so sorry for the other night" i pleaded. "its ok" and she walked away. she looked different for some reason. i just couldn't pick it. whenever i tried to talk to her she would answer with things like "im ok" and "its fine" and "ok then". One day she looked worse than ever, one big bruise on her arm. i asked her how she got it and she got real defencive.
i went to her place that night. i knew what i was doing was wrong but i had to. i snuck around the back, looking into her lounge window. what i saw was downright sick. her dad had a knife in one hand and was stabbing a blonde woman, about 30, really skinny. i ran away, faster than i've ever ran before.
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