Shady Hotel

Draft 1 pt1

As you walked down the concrete sidewalk you arrive at your destination, the hotel all your classmates were talking about.
"If this is the cheapest place I can rent, I can get through college pretty easily." You say to yourself as you walk in.
You walk in to see a really expensive yet efficient looking hotel entrance.
"Huh.. Is this place really cheap? It looks more then just cheap." You say.
"It is!" Another voice says. "Hmm?-"
"Oh right!- Welcome to the Shadow's hotel!" The Check-in/out person says.
"Oh hello, erm.. You are..?" You ask the pale person. "Oh- I'm Smiley but you can call me Teeth."
"I'm Y/N nice to meet you Smiley" You said as you shake his hand. You pause for a second as you zone out...
"Er, Y/N? You ok?-" Smiley asks. You manage to gain focus, "O-Oh sorry I tend to zone-out sometimes-" You answer Smiley. "Ah alright." Smiley says as he lets go of you hand. " A silence falls over both of you..
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"So um is this hotel a hotel Hotel or an apartment Hotel?" You say to break the silence "Oh it's an apartment Hotel, you gonna book a room or what?-" he replies. "R-Right a room, sure er how much for a week?" "Hmm around $100, buuuut I could make it 38 for you sweetie~" he says all flirty.
(The hell?!- Did just he flirt with me?-) you thought to yourself,
"So um, are you gonna take the offer or what?-" Smiley says putting an end to your thought, "Oh uh, $38 I guess-" you say awkwardly. After that small ordeal you went to your room, put your bags to the side, and fall onto the bed. You think about earlier, when you shook Smiley's hand. (Weird, those flashes are getting more vivid, I've just met him and now it's showing me he's a-) [KNOCK KNOCK.] Your train of thought was suddenly stopped by a knock on the door. "Um hey Y/N? It's Smiley, the time now is 6pm and you should eat dinner soon." "Wait it's already 6?!-"
"Erm yes? Look I I'm not a clock but I know it's already six-" (Huh guess I was deep in thought-) "You gonna buy dinner for yourself or am I gonna have to buy it for you?" "Oh um.." (W-Wait- he's gonna buy dinner for me?!- no, maybe he's just joking and-) "C'mon, you wanna starve or eat something gimme an answer-" (awh shoot he isn't joking-) "Uh- erm- sure, go buy dinner.??" (Danggit! My words slipped again-) "Well finally-" Smiley says as he walks away from the door of your room.
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It's been a few minutes since Smiley went out to buy food and now you've been thinking about all the time you've spent thinking. [Knock knock.] Smiley knocks on your door again, or so you think, "Yes?" you ask. No answer.. you ask again, "Erm, hello?" No answer again.. You decide to get up from your bed and open the door ajar to look outside, "Hmm?" No one was there. "What the- I swear I heard knocking from here, huh." You kinda sit near the door, waiting for Smiley to be back with the food.