S2 E1 Cleaning Trouble

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It's a rainy day on Dalmatian street, the pups and Dolly play out in the backyard as the rain just stopped falling.

All the pups begin to hop around in the mud, they are having tons of fun. Dolly chases Delgado around as he races through mud puddles and sends the mud flying into the pups he runs past.
Dylan however, just like always, is inside cleaning. He likes to stay clean and live clean. That means the house has to stay spotless. For him, he sees it as one of his favorite things aside space (Space is my Favorite thing too!).
The pups play outside for hours.
Which Dylan don't mind. He is cleaning up the final bit of kibble in the kitchen when the back door flies open and pups begin to flood the hallway covered in mud.
AHHHH! Wait..... Don't." Dylan says trying to stop the pups, but it's too late, Dylan is engulfed in the giant wave of pups that once towered over him.
Once the giant wave of pups ceased,
Dylan lays on the floor. Dolly sits next to him.
"Haha, bro. That was fun, wasn't it?" Dolly says.
Dylan opens his eyes to see all the walls and floors he just cleaned covered in mud.
"THAT'S ENOUGH!" Dylan says with an angry tone, "I HAVE HAD IT CLEANING UP YOUR MESSES."
Dylan storms off up the stairs.
Dawkins sits next to Dolly.
"Wow, we really set him off this time." Dawkins says.
"Whatever, He'll get over it." Dolly says.
Later that night, when all the pups are in bed. Dolly lies awake. Wondering what will happen tomorrow, when she hears Dylan talking outside the door. Dolly peaks out through the door and listens.
"Dawkins, I feel like all they do is use me to clean. And even then, they just make everything a whole lot messier." Dylan says.
"I'm sure there just pups being pups Dylan." Dawkins says.
"I know that about the pups, but Dolly. All she does is make things worse when she is trying to annoy me. She thinks she is just being funny. but really, she makes my whole life a lot worse. That's why I'm done cleaning." Dylan says. Dylan turns around and walks off.
Dolly leaves the room she was sleeping in and walks up to Dawkins,
"So what did I just hear?" Dolly asks.
"Dylan is done with cleaning." Dawkins says.
Dolly laughs, "Yeah, I would like to see how long that last."
Dawkins gives Dolly a blank stare. Which tells Dolly that Dawkins wasn't kidding about that.
"Alright, I'll talk to him, Tommorow." Dolly says.
The next day Dolly looks around for Dylan, but he is nowhere to be found.
Dizzy and DeeDee are playing around in the living room, Dolly walks up to them and asks, "Hey, have you guys seen Dylan?"

"He went to the canal to hang out with Fergus." Dawkins says from behind Dolly, "He just left."

"So, I can still catch him?" Dolly asks.

Dawkins shrugs. Because he don't even know the answer to that, "I mean, if your quick."

Dolly runs out the front door to see the tail of Dylan disappear around the corner.

"Dylan, bro" Dolly says.

Dylan hears this as hinted when his ears perk up when Dolly talked, but he decided to ignore her.

Dolly runs up beside Dylan, "Bro, don't ignore me. What has been going on with you recently."

Dylan keeps looking ahead of him, he is still mad from yesterday, "Dawkins didn't tell you then I presume, but I'm done with cleaning, Forever."

"You can't be serious, bro." Dolly says with a surprised tone.

"I am," Dylan says, "Every day it's the same thing, I try to keep the house clean for you pups. But after I get done it goes back to exactly as was before I cleaned it, lately I've been thinking that, maybe you pups don't see me as part of the family."

"Dylan...." Dolly starts, but can't find any words to make Dylan feel better. But then she got an Idea.

"You know what. You deserve a rest from cleaning," Dolly says, "Go hang out with Fergus and the rest of the Canal crew."

Dolly pushes Dylan in the direction of the canal with a big smile on her face. Once Dylan is a good distance away. Dolly heads back inside.
Dolly gathers all of the pups in the living room and states her plan to them.
"Alright pups, you know Dylan has been mad recently because of how we use him. Well, he is starting to think he is not part of the family." Dolly says, "We have to make it up to him, so today we will clean the house for him."
The big crowd of pups says, "Aw dog."

"Come on pups, Dylan has done so much for us. And what have we done for him?" Dolly says.
The pups begin to look at each other, then Dawkins, from the back of the crowd says, "I do suppose we owe him so much for what he does for us."
"Yeah, I agree with Dawkins for once. He has protected us more than once." Dante says.
"He does put us to bed at night....." Dizzy says.
"And reads us stories!" DeeDee finishes.

"Then what are we waiting for pups? Lets get to work. Dawkins, your on lookout. Dizzy DeeDee, your on wall duty. Dante, you got the floors. The rest of you pups. Clean as much as you can of any room." Dolly says, "Hurry!"

The pups scatter across the house cleaning anything they can. Dawkins sits at a window watching for Dylan.

In just about an hour, most of the house is spotless. But they all stopped when Dawkins said, "He is coming!"

"Quick, all together now." Dolly says.

The pups form a neat little line and Dorothy sits on Dolly's head.

When Dylan walks through the door his jaw almost immediately dropped. At first he didn't notice the walls weren't covered in mud.

"Who cleaned the house?" Dylan asked.

"We did!" Dizzy and DeeDee both say.

"We realized how much it meant for you to have a clean home, so when you decided to stop cleaning Dolly and all of us cleaned the house for you." Dawkins says.

"You might be that crazy control freak when it comes to cleaning, but your part of the family." Dante says.

"Now where's our money?" Dolly says.

"What was that Dolly?" Dylan says.

Dolly hugs Dylan tight and says, "I was just joking bro. Your part of the family we would do anything for you, and we know you would do anything for us."

"So bro, will you start keeping the house from being a disaster again?" Dolly asks.

Dylan gives a smile and says, "alright, I'll start cleaning again."

The pups were all laughing at Dolly's joke when the door handel crackles. When the door opens its Hunter.

"Hey pups, what did i miss?" Hunter says.

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This is a Fan Made episode by the members of TheDalmatianStudio

Credits to MachineGunDav with Plot Design. The_Dylan_Dalmatian for Plot Design and writing.
And Toronja Sama for Spanish translation.

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