Guys this is my first mature story.... Pls give inline comments... I'd love to know about your feelings regarding this ff.... This ff is for all of us amdheerians who didn't got a proper suhaagraat of amdheer... I hope that you'll love it like my other ffs
This story is the continuation of amdheer's first night.... In my way.... The story is same till randheer applied bindi on her forehead
But for those who didn't saw the episode pls read the first lines and my those readers who have watched the show pls read from the continued part mentioned below in bold letters:- CONTINUEDRandheer married amrit without the permission of rani maa and the members of raj pariwaar making them against their marriage..... Only bindu chachi and maanak accepted amrit as their daughter in law.... Chachiji even decorated their room beautifully for their first night.... Amdheer entered the room and got awkward seeing the room
Chachiji left the room keeping the baadaam ka doodh on the coffee table and giving amrit a beautiful red saree...
Amdheer became awkward for a moment..... Amrit left for washroom and randheer switched on the gramophone which played the song
Barsaat ki raat
and then settled himself on the chair feeling the beauty of this night.... His room and the feeling that finally his amrit is his wife and soon he'll see her adorned in colours....
Soon he heard her foot steps and he looked into the direction...and time stopped for him as she's looking as beautiful as a rose in her red saree.....her hairs wet and her face moist... The colour he always imagined on her....... His heart ached seeing her in that white saree living a plain white life...... But now he's content as now she is his in all sense and he'll make sure that no one can ever treat her the way she was treated in the past without any fault of hersEnthralled.. He went towards her...... Amrit also got lost seeing him..... They were lost in each other's eyes when a thunder striked making them come in their senses........ They got embarrassed and looked everywhere other than each other..... Amrit went to the dressing table to apply sindoor..... Seeing this randheer went towards her and kept his palm below her palm and looking deep into her eyes filled her partition with sindoor.... Happy tears started flowing from her eyes. ... Randheer then applied a bindi on her forehead lovingly making her look like a complete angel
His heart skipped a bit seeing his beautiful wife and he gestured beautiful with his fingers
CONTINUED
Amrit getting overwhelmed with so much emotions hugged him tightly..... Randheer also reciprocated the hug with equal passion
Amdheer in the hug
A- crying hard with hiccups" Randheer ... Ma.. Mai boh..ot darr gayi thi..... Ek pal ke liye toh laga ki Mai apna sab kuch kho baithi... apni maa na banne ki baat sunn aur aapko kabhi bacche ka sukh paate na dekhne ke darr se Mai jaa toh rhi thi par yeh soch bhi ki Mai aapko dekh nhi paungi...aapki aawaz nhi sunn paungi..aapko chu nhi paungi.....mujhe todd deta tha...mai soch bhi nahi paati thi ki aapke bina apni yeh zindagi kaise guzaarungi..."crying harder tightening his hold on him" Mai sach mai marr jaati aapke bina... Aapki yeh amrit nhi jee sakti apne randheer ke bina... marr jaati mai.. Marr jaati
Just listening one word "marr" From his beloved's mouth randheer's heart broke into pieces....he got scared to the core and breaking the hug immediately placed his palm on her lips to sush her
R- Shh kya bake jaa rhi hai aap haa pagal ho gyi hai "he reminisced all those past moments where he was just an inch closer to lose her for forever....these digged emotions came out in the form of anger" " In an angry and hurt voice" aur kya krne jaa rhi thi aap ha.. Chodd ke jaa rhi thi aap apne randheer ko ha.....socha aapne ek baar bhi mere baare mai.....ek baar bhi yeh khyaal aaya aapke zehen mai ki aapka yeh randheer jo aapse iss duniya mai sabse zyada pyaar karta hai... Jiske harr dhadkan mai sirf aur sirf aap rehti hai woh kaise jeeyega aapke bina ha......... arre zinda laash se bhi buri haalat ho jaati meri... Aur kaha jaa rhi thi aap mujhe chod ke ha..ladaakh hai na...."cupping her cheeks.....crying" Agar aap chali jaati na amrit toh shayad waha meri laash
He wasn't able to complete his sentence as he got interrupted by a yell of his amrit
A- "yelled" Randheer "in a warning tone" khabardaar jo aisi baatein bhi nikaali apne muh se toh.
R- "leaving her cheeks and in a hurt and mocking tone" Kyu sirf aapko hi haq hai kuch bhi bol dene ka kuch bhi kar jaane ka ha pehle toh veer se jhuthi shaadi ka dikhawa kiya.. Phir mujhe bachaane ke liye veer se hi shaadi kar li......ek pal ke liye bhi mujhe ehsaas tak nhi hone diya aapne ki aap mere liye kya kr rhi hai... "Shaking her shoulders lightly......crying bitterly with hiccups" Amrit aapko pata bhi hai ki unn dino kya haalat hui thi meri... Pal pal marr raha tha mai ........pata nhi kitni koshishei ki aapse nafrat karne ki par baar baar aapke pyaar mai aur dhansta gaya mai aur aap... aap soch bhi kaise leti hai ha ki aapka yeh randheer aapke bina jee sakta hai ha....aaj bhi chal padi thi maa ki iccha puri karne ke liye......mujhe chod ke durr ladaakh nikalna chahti thi na aap... Woh toh accha hua ki mujhe sab samajh aa gya.....agar wahi pehle wali bewakoofi kar baitha hota mai toh....soch ke bhi rooh kaanp jaati hai meri......Aaj tak maaf nhi kar paaya hu mai khudko apne sacche pyaar ko uss samay yun takleef pohochane ke liye aur na kabhi kar paunga.....kabhi nahi aur aaj aaj mai phir aapko khone wala tha.......kyu nhi samajh aati aapko itni choti si baat ki yeh randheer apni amrit ke bina kuch nhi hai..kuch nhi....... Koi wajood nhi hai iska aapke bina... Aap meri aatma hai.... Mera dil hai amrit aur unn dono se durr hoke ek insaan ke andar kuch baaki nahi reh jaata kuch bhi nahi....."taking her in a tight hug like she'll vanish in a second" Kbhi mat jaiega mujhse dur samjhi aap kbhi nhi.
A- "cutely complaining.....crying with hiccups in the hug" Mai konsa apni shauk se aapse dur jaana chahti thi ha.... Woh toh humesha kismat hi hume durr karne ki thaan leti thi.... Pehle bhi aapka intezaar karti rahi....harr pal sirf aapki raah dekhti rahi....par aap..aap..."she couldn't continue as she didn't wanted to hurt him by saying that he was not with her when she needed her the most" .......Koi nahi tha mere paas jo mujhe samajhta ho koi nahi....bilkul akeli pad gayi thi...bilkul akeli........sab dhutkaarte the mujhe mere daag ki wajah se.... Saroj parjaayi toh jaise mujhse nafrat hi karti thi.... Bohot buri hai woh bohot buri humesha aapke baare mai anaab shabaab bolti rehti thi......mujhse toh ek naukrani se bhi buri tarah se pesh aati thi......."breaking the hug and complaining him" Aapko pata bhi hai sab na mujhe bas ek hi baat kehte rehte the ki mai bhul jaau aapko......aap kabhi nahi aayenge mere paas wapas....agar aana hota na toh bohot pehle hi aa chuke hote.....Parjaayi ji ne toh pata nhi kitni baar meri shaadi karwaani chahi par maine kabhi haar nhi maani humesha ladti rahi kabhi parjaayi ji se kabhi bhaanu veerji se kabhi samaaj se toh kabhi khud se "randheer looked at her with questioning eyes...seeing which amrit replied" hmm aaj tk kisi se na kaha aur na kabhi apne chehre pe dikhne diya par bohot darr lgta tha mujhe aapke bina...... Din bhar toh jaise taise khudko ghar ke kaam mai dhaal kar sambhaal leti thi magar raat mai... Raat mai bohot darr lagta tha mainu din bhar ki saari kadwi baatein yaad aa jaaya karti thi aur aapko kho dene ka darr mujhe na sone deta tha aur na chain se baithne deta tha..... Mai aapko khud khojna chahti thi randheer sach mai bohot koshishen bhi ki par veerji ne kbhi aisa krne nhi diya..... Bas postman ka hi sahaara reh gya tha mere paas....din raat bas aapke ek chitthi ka intezaar karti thi....... Postman ki ek aawaz sunte hi main paagalon ki tarah daud jaaya karti thi par sirf niraasha hi haath lagti.... Kuch der toh mann bohot dukhta par aapko paane ki ummeed kabhi nhi gayi mere andar se woh harr subah ke saath aur badh jaati mere andar.....mai toh aise hi apni puri jindagi aapka intezaar bhi kar leti......"crying bitterly with hiccups" Par sab kuch khatm hogya randheer....sab kuch khatm ho gaya jab veer aa dhamke meri jindagi mai...... Bohot koshishein ki maine bhaanu veerji aur parjaayiji ko manaane ki par unhe meri nhi sirf paiso ki fikar thi...... Asal mai meri khushiyaan toh unke liye bas ek bahaana thi unhe toh bas veer ke diye gye paison se matlab tha..... Mere apne hi veerji ne sauda kiya mera randheer sauda kiya .... Agar aaj maa bauji hote na toh kade bhi aisa nahi hone dete mere naal.... Kade bhi nahi..kyu mai anaath ho gayi randheer....... kyu hua mere saath aisa kyu baar baar mujhe hi saare dukh mile kya mai itni buri hu ki bhagwaan ji mainu bilkul nahi pasand karte hai...... Maine toh aaj tak kisi ka bhi bura nhi kiya toh phir mere saath itna galat kyu hota aaya hai randheer kyu aur ab bhi bhagwaan ne mujhse mere maa banne ki khushi chin lili. .... Kyu randheer kyu kya bigaada hai maine kisika kya
Randheer's heart was breaking seeing this state of his once cheerful amrit but he knew that it's necessary for her to vent out all her pain.. anger frustration or else it'll not be good for her health..... Thus he listened patiently to her.... But after sometime amrit's breathes started becoming heavy..... Afraid randheer tried to calm her down.... Soothe her from all her pains.... Thus... Taking her in a hug and rubbing her back.... In a soothing tone he said
R- Amrit shh kuch nhi bigaada hai aapne kisika...kuch bhi nahi...... Aap na iss duniya ki sabse acchi insaan hai aur ab...ab aap kabhi akeli nahi rahengi....kabhi nahi aapka randheer humesha aapke saath rahega humesha... Kabhi aapko khud se dur nahi jaane dunga mai....... Aaj se aapki saari takleefein meri hai.... Kisi bhi musibat ko ab aapse guzarne se pehle iss randheer se guzarna hoga aur mai vaada karta hu amrit ab aapko koi pare
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Amdheer: The Night We Became One
FanfictionThe story showcases the whole amdheer's suhaagraat that we didn't got in our show