BarleyRaven

Chapter one Raven paws POV:

"Awwww your so cute when you pounce on a mouse like that!" Sol purred (Can we pretend Sol is good? Can we!?Please)

I rolled my eyes "whatever." He was cute in his own way though........

"Huh, do you hear that? It kinda sounds like a monster." He asked. I listened, "Hmmmm I don't really hear anything Sol, are you sure you heard a monster? A monster here, in our barn?" He looked around, "I-I thought  I heard something."

I shrugged. "Well since there's probably no monster, want to share this mouse with me?"

 Sol looked tense for a moment then said slowly; "I suppose." 

Once we finished our mouse, I decided to start a civil conversation. "Sooooo which Clan is your favorite?" He took a moment  to  think then said: "Well you told me all about Thunder clan and they sound great, but I always admired River clan." 

I pretended to be hurt, "NOooooooOoooo! How could you-." "Eh I just like how their independent and they USUALLY don't get involved into other Clan stuff!" "Hmmmmm alright I suppose your correct." 

"What about you?" I stared at him. "You already know!" "Then what's your second favorite?" I thought for what seemed like moons and said; "I suppose I like Windclan, their nice and fast and Onestar is leading them. And because Barley and I gave them shelter when Thunderclan was getting them back in to camp so Shadowclan wouldn't take their territory." "And, that- actually I can't think of anything else.

But yeah their my second favorite." But as soon as I finished I heard a roaring screech that identified the sound as a monster! Sol was right! "Ravenpaw come on! We got to get out of here!" 

I scurried to the back exit hoping to get out alive. Then, I heard a yelp  behind me. Sol! The idiot got his tail stuck under a hay bale! I sprinted towards him, but it was too late. The monster ran over him and he was crushed. There was no way he could have survived. "Sol no!!" I wanted to die so I could be with him, hunting in Starclan but I knew he wouldn't want that so I ran out as fast as I could and slammed through the doors and rolled into the grass.

 'No time to stop I got to keep running' I bolted into the forest and finally stopped near a lake. Gasping for breath- I did a replay in my mind of what just happened. 

-Sol died

-Our home was ruined

-Everybody reading this book is wondering when Barley comes in (wait it's soon)

This was horrible.

                              How did you like it? Sorry I made the so death fast! Any ideas for the next chapter?