Shot 1 - Love

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Two girls are waiting for the bus at the bustand holding books in their hands.
They are students from the last year of graduation.
Avni :(signs) Riya chalo aaj rikshaw mein chalte hain.
Varna der ho jayega.
Riya : Nahi bass 5min dekte hain bas uske baad bus nahi aye tho rikshaw mein chale jate hain.
Avni : ok.(signs)
Avni is an orphan and She is dumb too.
she lost her voice when her parents were dead.
Riya belongs to middle class family.
From the certain distance three boys were standing and talking.
But one guy is looking at one girl.
He is adoring her without blinking his eyes.
She knows that he is looking.
She got habituated.
She is a silent and innocent girl.
He is in love with that girl since two years.
He is two years elder to her.
Ofcourse it's our Neilkhanna.
To become an Army officer is his biggest dream.
He is also an orphan like Ali and Vidyut.
All the three grown up together.
Ali n vidyut settled well with their jobs.
Meanwhile Neil is waiting for his chance.
Riya : Avni bus agayi...chalo.
Both got inside the bus and settled themselves.
Neil : Vidyut chal jaldi bike start kar....bus ja rahi hai....
Vidyut : Haa rukh...
Ali : Yarr Neil Uss riya ko mera set kardo yar.
Neil glares at him.
Vidyut starts bike and Neil sat between Ali n vidyut.
Neil : Jaldi chal...
Vidyut : arre chal tho raha hoon.
Avni turned and looked back from the window of the bus.
She had seen that neil is following her like always.
He looked at her and smiled.
She is back to her position and smiling.
Riya : Ahaa....smiling and all....
Avni glares at her controlling her blush.
Riya : Ab accept thi karo inko...
Bechara kab se peecha kar raha hain.
Avni sat silent.
Riya sighed.
Soon their stop came and Avni and riya got down and going inside the college.
Vidyut too stopped the bike just infront of the college gate.
Neil is looking at her until she goes inside.
Suddenly Avni turned and looked at Neil.
Neil again smiled widely after her looking.
Avni turned again and left for her classroom.
Ali : Pagal hai ye ladka(to vidyut)
Vidyut is looking at neil who is lost and smiling.
Vidyut : Abe 2saal se kutte ki tarah uss Avni ka peecha kar rahe ho...
Lekin ab tak koi response nahi hain.
Itna kyun hass rahe ho??
Neil : Tum nahi samjhogi.
She too loves me.
Ali : I hope so....
Lekin tum aur Avni ek hone ke baad...riya ko mujhse milva lo.(smiling sheeplessly)
Neil : Yaha mere jugad nahi hua....lekin ab mein tumhe dekh loon???(glaring)
Ali : O..ok...ok.
Vidyut laughing at poor Ali.
Vidyut : chalo ab time ho raha hain.
Ali : haa chal.
They both returned from there.
Right now Neil is free as he is waiting for army postings.
Neil always wanted to become an army officer.
He is completely fit and strong to become an army officer.
He has already completed training and fitness test.
Rightnow he is sitting idle at home watching movie.
But his all thoughts were on only his avni.
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It was around 9PM in the night.
Avni came out of her office after finishing her partime work.
when she stepped out everything seemed to be very dark.
Cool wind is blowing.
No single persons on the road.
Every day neil comes to her office and waits outside for her.
later he walks along with avni making some distance until she reaches NGO as it is not safe to go alone during nights.
He always care for her.
But today he did not came.
Avni is searching for him.
But he is nowhere.
She is not habituated to walk alone since 2 years.
Finally avni decided to send a message to him.
Neil,Ali and vidyut are chichating sitting on a roadside bench somewhere.
Suddenly neil phone beeped.
He took his phone out and saw that he had a message from avni.
But its a blank message.
He saw the time and realised that its already over 9PM.
Neil : Shittttt........
vidyut : kya hua ??
Neil : avni ke pass jana hai.
Ali : haa tho jao.
neil : usne msg bhi bheja hai.....mujhe jana hain.
vid/ali : Kya??????message bheja avni ne????
dikhao hume dekhna hai??
Neil : kya dekhoge???Its a blank message.
Ali and vidyut looked at him like what the hell......
Ali : abe blank msg ka kya matlab hota hai??
Neil : Iska matlab ye hai ki "Kutton ke sath time waste math karo aur jaldi aao"
Ali and  vidyut started glaring him.
Vidyut : Kutton ki dost bhi kutta hota hai.....
Ali : haaa....
Neil glares at them.
Neil : ab jaldi chalo its already late.Akela hogi vaha
Vidyut started the bike and three droved off.
Soon they reached avni's office.
Avni is standing in one corner infront of the office.
She stood stiff holding her hand bag tightly.
Neil looked at her and smiled.
Vidyut : Ab ye hasna band karo aur jao.
Lagta hai akele jane mein dar lag rahi hai
Neil : yes.
Ok tum log jao aur ngo ke pass wait karo.
Ali : ok...
Ali n vidyut left.
Neil went towards Avni and stood infront of her.
Avni looked at him.
Avni simply turned and started walking.
Her lips slightly curved.
Neil is walking after her.
Neil : ab...aa....tum ne vo blank msg kyun bheja???
I..I mean kuch likha hota uss msg mein.
Afterall it's a first msg from you.
Avni turned her face aside and smiling.
Neil noticed this.
He too smiling.
Neil : Waise msg kyun bheja???
Avni is still silent.
Neil : ohoo.....
Raat hogayi....akeli hogayi.....meri adat hogayi....shayad akele jane mein dar lag raha hoga???
Am I right???
Avni didn't responded him.
Neil : Hogayi na meri adat??
Avni : .....
Neil : Ok I got it...tabhi tho msg bejh rahi thi tum.
Ab zindagi bar aisa chup rahogi kya??
Kuch tho response dedo yar...
Avni is looking down n smiling.
Soon they reached her NGO.
Avni is going inside.
Avni turned back to Neil and smiled.
For the first time she smiled looking into his eyes.
Neil too smiled back ruffling his hairs.
She turned and going inside.
Neil : Avniii......
I love you❤️(shouts)
Avni went inside smiling.
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After 1week.
Avni is sitting on the bed and crying holding her knees close to her chest.
Madhavi tai,who is one of the workers  looked her crying when she was  approaching her room.
Madhavi tai went to her.
Medhavi tai : Avni beti kya hua???
Tu kyu ro raha hai??
Avni immediately wiped her eyes.
Avni nodded her head signing kuch nahi.
Madhavi tai : Nahi meine dekha hai...
Tu ro rahi thi...
Avni couldn't controlled herself and started crying again.
Madhavi tai hugged her and consoling her.
Madhavi tai : Kisi ne kuch kaha kya??
Avni nodded in no.
Madhavi tai : Tumhare sath roj ek ladka aata hai usne kuch kiya hai kya tere sath??
Avni nodded strongly this time.
Avni : Vo bohot acha hai. (Signs)
Madhavi tai : Pyar karte ho usse??
Avni kept silent.
Madhavi tai : Tumhari khamoshi se hee sab samaj aa raha hai mujhe.
Avni looked her.
Tears formed in her eyes again.
Madhavi tai wiped her tears
Madhavi : Ja....uske pass jao aur kehdo  ki tum usse pyar karti ho.
Avni nodded her head in no.
Avni : Agar vo bhi mujhe maa aur papa ki tarah chod ke chala gaya tho?? (Signs)
Madhavi tai : Pagal ladki...
Aisa thodi na hota hain.
Vo bhi tujhse pyar karta hain.
Mein janti hoon.
Do saal se dekh raha hoon unko.
Bahut acha ladka hain.
Iss se pehle der ho jaye jake usse sab kuch bol do.
Avni : Kya mein unke ke liye sahi hoon??
(Signs)
Madhavi tai chuckles.
Madhavi tai : Tum bahut achi ladki ho??
Iss liye tho vo tujhse itna pyar karta hai.
Tum jaise ladki milne wale bahut lucky hain.
Avni Smiled in tears.
Madhavi tai : Ab batao??
Tum bhi pyar karte ho na uss se??
Avni nodded her head in yes looking down
Madhavi tai : Ye hui na baat.
Ab ye rona band karo aur so jao.
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Next day.
Ali and Vidyut came to Neil running holding some cover letter in their hands.
Ali / vidyut : Neill......
Neil : Kya hua???itna kyun chilla rahe ho tum dono??
Ali n vidyut were sad.
Ali forwarded him a cover letter.
Neil took that.
He is looking them frowning as they were sad.
Neil opened the letter and read.
He is smiling and he was very happy.
Neil : Finally......Mera posting aagaya.
Kitna intazaar kar raha tha mein.
Ab mein army officer ban gaya ab.
Ali n vidyut didn't even congratulated him.
Neil noticed them.
Neil : Oyy tum dono ko kya hua??
Ali : K..kuch nahi.
Vidyut : Congratulations.
They both didn't had any emotion in their faces.
Ali n vidyut hugged Neil together.
That's a trio hug.
Neil too hugged them.back.
But he sensed something wrong.
Neil : Kya hua yarr..
Ali : Ab tum hume chodke Kashmir chale jaoge na?
Vidyut : Bachpan se teeno ek sath paida hua.
Ab hume tum ko vaha jate hue acha nahi lag raha hai.
Neil smiled at them.
Neil : bass itni si baat....
Agar tum log mana kar diya tho mein nahi jaunga.
Ali n vidyut stunned at his words.
Ali : Nahi yarr aisa math karo...
Army officer banna tumhara dream hain.
Vidyut : Haa hum nahi chahte hain ki hamari vajah tumhara dream fulfil na ho.
Neil : Nahi...vo meri dream tha.
Lekin tum dono meri friends hai..meri family hain.
Mein kabhi bhi tum dono ke kilaf nahi jaunga.
Vidyut and Ali felt blessed to have a friend like Neil.
Lekin ek baat tum logo ki nahi sununga mein.
Ali/vidyut : Kya hai??
Neil : Mein meri Avni ko nahi chod sakta.
Ali n vidyut laughs.
Vidyut : Tum aur tumhara pagal pyar...
Ali : waise ab Avni ka kya karogi??
Matlab unse baat karo ek baar.
Neil : Baat tho karna padega...
Vidyut : Do din mein tumhe kashmir ke liye nikal na hoga.
Neil : Mein kal hee Avni se baat karta hoon.
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Next day evening.
5PM.
Neil informed riya that he had to talk something important to Avni.
Avni too agreed to meet Neil.
Neil is waiting for Avni outside of the college near a bench.
Avni came out.
Neil smiled looking at her.
Avni too slightly smiled and bowed her head.
She came towards him and stood.
Neil : ab...aa...baith ke baat karte hain.
Avni sat on the bench.
Neil too sat beside her making some distance.
Avni is only looking down holding her books tightly.
Neil : Avni tum se kuch kehna hai...
Mera army ka posting aagaya.
Mein kal hee ja raha hoon kashmir.
This time Avni looked at him shocking.
She is worried.
But neil didn't looked at her when he is telling this.
Neil : Mein bas tum se ye kehne aayi hoon.
Slowly tears were formed in her eyes.
Neil : Avni....I don't know ki tum mujh se pyar karte ho ya nahi.
But I really loved you....and will always love you forever.
Tears started flowing from her eyes.
Neil : But take your time.
There is no hurry.
Jo bhi tumhara decision hai I'll respect that.
Mein tumhe kabhi kisi bhi baat ke.liye force nahi karungi.
Avni rubbed her tears.
Neil looked at her and he slowly moved a bit closer to her.
He was about to hold her hands in his.
But he thought that Avni will be uncomfortable with that and he took his hands back.
For sometime they both kept silent.
They didn't spoke to each other a single word.
They simply sat silent.
After 10minutes.
Neil : A..ab...mein chalta hoon.
Neil stood and started moving slowly.
He is going towards his bike, but  suddenly he felt two hands hugging him tightly with a force.
He balanced himself holding those hands.
He can hear a Loud sobbing and crying.
He turned around and looked at Avni who is crying bitterly.
Tears formed in his eyes as he couldn't see his love crying.
Neil : Av...Avni kya hua??
Tum ro kyun rahi ho?
His hands were on her cheeks.
Avni immediately thrown herself on him hugging him tightly.
Neil was stunned.
Neil too hugged her tightly.
Both had a tears in their eyes.
Neil : Sshhhh...kya hua Avni.
He broke the hug and held her face.
Neil : Tum please ro math..
Mujh se nahi dekha ja raha hai tumhara aasu.
He wiped her tears.
Avni took her note book and pen.
She wrote something on the book.
Avni : I love you.
Neil read that and felt very happy.
Finally after 2years she opened up her feelings.
Neil is smiling in tears.
Neil : Y..you really love me???
Avni nodded her head.
Neil hugged her tightly.
She too reciprocated.
He kissed all her face.
Neil : I love you too...I love you more than anything.
I love you meri jaan.❤️
I love you❤️.
Avni is still sobbing.
Avni again about to write something...
Neil : Nahi....mein sign language samaj sakta hoon.
Tum batao kya hai??
Avni frowned because how could he understand sign language
Neil : Meine meri Avni ke liye sign language sikh liya.
Avni really felt blessed to have him.
Avni : Tum wapas kab aaoge??(signs)
Neil : Pata nahi...jab mujhe holidays milega tab aunga.
Agar tumhari jyada yaad agayi tho sab chodke ajaunga.
Avni smiled in tears.
Avni : I'll miss you ( signs)
Neil held her hand and kept near her heart.
Neil : Mein hamesha yaha rahoongi.
Avni nodes her head in yes.
Neil : Agli baar mein jab bhi aunga...tumhe shadi karne ke liye aaunga.
Mrs Avni Neil Khanna bana dunga tumhe.
Avni blushed this time.
Neil : Hayee.....
He kissed on her cheeks.
Avni looked down shying.
But tears again formed in her eyes.
Neil wiped her tears.
Avni :(signs) roj sham ko office se NGO tak mera sath kaun chalega???
Neil felt emotional this time.
He kissed her forhead.
Avni :(signs) Bohot yaad ayegi tumhari...
Neil : Aisa math kaho yarr...mein nahi jaa paunga.
Avni hugged him tightly.
Neil too hugged her back.
Neil broke the hug.
He took something from his pocket.
It's a bracelet.
Avni looked at that bracelet and again at him.
Neil : Tumhare liye.
Do saal se isse pocket mein rakh ke ghoom raha hoon.
Avni chuckled.
He held her hand and put the bracelet on her hand.
He kissed her knuckles lovingly looking into her eyes.
Later he kissed her forhead.
But Avni is still looking sad.
Neil : I promise mein jald hee wapas aunga....aur tumse shadi bhi karunga.
Avni nodded her head in tears.
They had a tight hug.
Continues.....
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