My 5 sexy kidnapers (1D fanfic)

Chapter 1

Me and brad (A.K.A my boyfriend ) are going to the mall k. I yell to the kitchen where my mom is

Sure thing Hun. My mom says

LATTER AT THE MALL

AHHHHHHHHH. I and brad here a girl scream a cross the road in an ally .

I'm going over there . brad said

No don't go there . I said because I didn't want him to get hurt

Bang bang. I heard

Noooooooooo. I scream

to see brad and the girl on the ground .

I think they heard me. I say on the inside

But when I think to start running I turn around to look at brad one last time then run right in front of one of the boys that killed brad I then back up into on other and run to the side only to bump in to on other only to be piked up and thrown in to there car and got drugged to here one say is she out then everything got dark.

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Hey guys so in this book the boys aren't famous yet well I don't know if I'm gonna make them famous so any ways the girls name is lauryn I couldn't fit that in cuz I would have been weird if I talked in the third person ... So tell me if you like it or not so far and just be honest I won't mad if u don't like it and if u didn't like it or did tell me what I should change and what you like

So who do you think is gonna fall in love with lauryn and who she will fall for.

Harry

Niall

Liam

Zayn

Or Louis

Tell me oh and sorry for it being being so short I was gonna add more but I would have given a bit to much away