I'm glad I dropped my drink

OMG... your.....

(Hi this is one of my first books so I would be really grateful to get back any constructive critism I really hope u enjoy the book love HeistSocietyForeverxxx)

Lola's POV

"Hi can I have a hot chocolate, thanks" I said.
I'm super stressed out I have a casting today, why oh why today!!!!!! It was for a stupid role anyway, not even a role an extra, you see I'm an inspiring actress who is getting no f****** work at all!!!!
"Hot Chocolate" said the bar man.
"Thxs mate" I replied even though I was already running late.
I pushed open the door and pulled out my phone to check the time. It was 10:50, I might as well not go but I need the money. I rolled my eyes and just as I realised I was still standing in the doorway some idiot bumped into me.
"What is your problem!!!!!" I said bending down to get the half empty cup. As I started to stand up my eyes locked with hazel/ green eyes. They were so beautiful. Then I realised...
"OMG your..."
"Harry Styles" he said.
I was so surprised with my calm composure I took a minute to check him out he was wearing a blue beanie keeping his unruly (amazing) curls hidden and overall looked fit.
"Ummmm eyes up here" he said cutting me out of my trance.
"I'm so sorry it's just that u are so fit!" I said. OMG did I just embarrass myself in front on him I could feel myself going red and I never go red.
He laughed and said"Well ur so fit too."
I felt myself quiver at the knees, no boys ever have this effect on me and he does, what is wrong with.
"Anyway u look like ur in a rush do u need any help." He said.
" Thanks but no thxs I think I'm just going I be late to my audition."
"Audition...." He said .
"Yeah I'm an actress" I said doing quotation marks in the air.
"I'm so sorry for running into u and making u drop ur drink I really didn't mean to what time is ur audition and for what movie." He said.
"Don't worry, I'm fine and my audition is in 2 minutes and its for the next divergent movie I'm just an extra though." I sighed.
"Omg ur gonna be late." Harry said.
"Tell me something I don't know(always need a bit of Selena Gomez)." I said.
"Wait its for the divergent movie right, my friends directing it I can get u an audition for later and a real part." harry said.
" No that's too much fuss it's fine I guess I can pass up on this."
He stared at me and said" u know u are really beautiful."
I smiled.
"I'm gonna get u an audition." Harry said.
"No please don't i said"
" No I would do anything for a girl like u Im going to get u that audition." Harry said
"Oh yeah can I get ur number."harry said.
" Oh yeah and ur name lol" harry said
"Sure(I gave it to him) thxs so much for this u are my saver my name is Lola . I said.
"Most beautiful name in the world for the most beautiful girl in the world, I'll text u to tell u when ur audition and when our date is gonna be." Harry said
"Date?!?!?!" I said.
"Yeah I really like u and we are going out on a date" harry said.
Just like that he kissed me on the check leaving a burning sensation and jogged off.
I think I'm in love....