The Pop 5 in School

Chap1

Rapunzel(Not starting with elsa or jack)):
Punizel hurry up,I'm coming.I woke up late.Who wakes up late on the first day of school?Well I do elsa.Hi mer,hey punizel.Ican't belive u woke up late.I know I alomst skipped breakfast mer.
Uuhh elsa earth to elsa let's go,ok ok mer were going.It's so cool that we don't have to take the bus like last year.
Elsa p.o.v
I always day dream that I'm with this guy but I don't even know him.
An hour eariler
Jacks p.o.v
As I pick up hic I think about a girl I have never see in my life yet.I feel like I know her so much.Hey jack,hi hic.Ready to go get tacos,ya sure.
8:30a.m still jack's p.o.v
As we get to the school a white car pull's up.
Elsa p.o.v
As I pull up my litte white car I park it next to a blue truck.As we get out so do 2 boys.I say hi to be polite, punziel and mer say hi to.They both say hi but look a litte surprised.One of them has a blue jacket and black jeans with whiteish hair.The other one has a green shirt with black jeans and brown hair.
Hiccups p.o.v
As we get out three other girls get out.The frist one that says hi is wearing black jeans and a blue sleevless shrit with greyish whiteish,hair and a grey beanie.The second one has her hair in a long briad witch is blonde and has a pink dress on.When I land,on the last on I notice that her eyes r green she is waring a red drees with green flat's.
Hey guy's this is my fanfiction of jelas please vote and commet or like.Sorry for the gramer and spelling I'm super bad at it.~Mary
P.S.If like please tell me cause I think it's bad and,don't know if I should do more.