Wait what I'm a Half Blood?

my story of a half blood.

The story begins. Hi, my name is Vanessa. I am 12 years old. My birthday is next week I am so excited my friends name is Marissa. I live in NY city. This is how my life change for ever. Time skip! One week later. I woke up to Marissa singing happy birthday to you you live in a zoo you look like a monkey and smell like one to. I look at my clock it was 6:50 a.m.What are you doing here? I muttered. It's your birthday she said smiling. So its 6:53 in the morning. I said. Well come on I have a surprise. Fine but let's get ready for school since where already up. I started to put my brown hair up in a ponytail and I also have dark green eyes. I got my clothes on which I wearing a blue dress Blue is my favorite.
Marissa started to brush her hair which she has brown she put on her green shirt and her old jeans. We race to the bathroom of course I won so I brushed my teeth. I put on lipstick and a little bit of eyeliner. Once I got out Marissa race in . She wear no makeup she believes that it hides the real beauty. I wondered how did she get her shoes on so fast I mean I have never seen her bare feet which is kind of weird. So I went to my room and put on some purple sneakers. I know you might be thinking what type of girl wears a dress with sneakers. ( well I do). I am NOT a girly girl. Once Marissa got out we went downstairs. Oh I forgot to tell you Marissa can't walk she has a leg disorder so she uses crutches. A huge birthday cake with 13 candles. Hi sweetie happy birthday how old are you again 22?my mom said . No I'm 13 years old I said. Oooo I forgot sorry my mom sarcastically said. Chapter 2. Camp half-blood??

It's time for you two to go to school. Mom said. So me and Marissa got are bags ready. Marissa can I borrow your notes I asked? Why you didn't read the book? she asked . No I've been busy you know. I won't tell anybody I promise. Fine here just don't let Mr. Hanson see you you will be in detention for ever. She warned. Me and Marissa hurry done the stairs. Bye mom.
Author's note:
I am in 6th grade. This is my first book. I hope you enjoy it. If you haven't figured out the book is about a girl learned that she is A half blood I don't want to give it away so I well B reading the comments.

Marissa come on we're going to be late again. Hey at least you can walk so how about you slow its down. Ok sorry. I said. once we got to the bus I noticed two things first one where was our bus driver Mr Chiu our bus driver is a man, there's no one on the bus aside for the lady bus driver?. Marissa looked like she is  about to jump on the bus driver. Hey Vanessa how about we walk to school. the bus driver looked at us not in a nice way. yeah let's walk. follow me Vanessa I know a faster way. Um ok lead the way. Marissa where are you taking me I mean us. There's no reason to be scared this is a faster way to school. We walks through a dark forest I don't get scared easily but this is scary. Marisa do you hear something. Yeah shhhhh be quiet. Run run go now!!!!!!!!!!! What I look behind me there was a dog not just a regular dog it has  bleeding holes in it. The teeth were as big as my hand !!!!! It was black. I took off. Come on I yell at Marissa. She was in front of me ? I looked at her feet they were hooves .she had fur on them . following me okay don't look behind you . I look behind me. That was a mistake. Wen I look I trip over a stick. Vaness cried Marissa! Pain just shot up my leg my ankle was at a unnatura angle. The dog was so close I could feel its breath. Marissa raced off try not to get eaten I'll be right back and she threw me a knife. Wait what what are you doing don't just leave me here. I'll be back i promise
I'm getting help! I tried to get up but I couldn't it hurts to much. I pick up the knife I didn't like it but I don't won't to die. The dog got close to me I cut its paw .hurry up I can't do this! I look behind me I didn't notice the arch that said Camp Half Blood. Three girls come out one was Marissa the two other girls I didn't know. The two girls went to the dog and started fighting . Marissa dragged me to. the arched sign.we went in then I Pass out chapter 3 what is a half-blood. I woke up to Marissa and the other girls looking at me. W-what happened? I muttered. Hi I'm Annabeth. hi I'm Piper. Here eat this Annabeth offered this food thing . What does this do I asked her. It's going to help you heal faster it is the food of the gods. How long was I out. 2 days Marisa said. Marissa go show her around . Okay Annabeth. What was that? marisa answered it was a hell hound.
Chapter 3 I'm a half blood
Ok Vanessa that is Zeus's cabin. Cool wow. How many camps are there I asked? 20 .wow ! Wait what are you. I look down at her legs she was half goat? O I forgot I'm a satyrs. A-a w-what wait isn't that Greek? I muttered. Yeah . You said you can't walks if I recall. Yes I did to hide my cover. Next thing I know there's a bell rings.o come on it's dinner. They were 20 tables. Where do I sit. for now you sit at that table. I looked over where she was pointing about 30 kids sat at the table. Um ok? I walked over to it and tried to find a place to sit. I found a place to sit at the right end of the table. I thought that steak sounded good. This can't be a coincidence on my plate was a big juicy steak. So I thought about my favorite drink root beer. In my Cup. A brown liquid filled up my cup. I sip it up it was root beer. Every one stud up and walk over to the camp fire. I walked over to Marissa and asked what are we doing? I looked around and everyone was throwing the best part of the meal in the camp fire. So Vanessa we through are best part of are meal and wish it to are godly parent. She went and put a huge amount of broccoli cheese soup in the camp fire. I heard her say to pan. Wen it was my turn i put in a big juicy steak and said to my dad please calm me. After everyone was done eating we all walked to the camp fire and started to sing. I didn't recognize the song's. I walked over to the girl name Annabeth. But the fire was blue and six feet tall. Hi I
Whisper to Annabeth. Hi she whisper back. What are we doing i asked? She answer ok so we are singing songs and the fire is based on are mods so if it is low that means that we are sad.