This is my first book so tell me what you think
Chapter 1
Me and my friends were setting up for the party i was having tonight for my 18th birthday it was about 9:00 when people were coming to my house then about halfway trough the party i went into my bedroom to get a black dress on and there was a knock on my door thinking it was my friends i said come in while i was naked a tall handsome curly haired man walked in and i was like woah what are u doing and who are u then he grabs my phone and puts his # in it and says good night cutie.I'm thinking what just happened i quickly got dressed and ran to see if i could find him but he was nowhere i asked my friends if they saw him and they said no.
Um so what you think
Chapter 2
that night i was just getting my shorts on then my phone buzzed so i dropped my pants and grabbed the phone it said hey close your blinds the next time u are naked love H xx i sent back u weirdo the next morning I wake up to a txt saying hi get downstairs love H xx i sent u are in my house get out NOW mad face and we sent txts back the whole time i was getting ready i sent are u out yet he said no now come on down i want to see u *wink wink* so when i got down there my mom was not there and there was a plate of pancakes,eggs,bacon and orange juice and there was a note saying when u are down go in to the basement don't bring ur phone love H xx so i did but i slipped my pager in my purse so if any funny or bad stuff happen i have something to help me when i got down there the door was closed... I opened it then...