"KILL THE DEAMON! KILL IT"
Your probably wondering, 'What in kamis name is happening?' Well here is what the civilian council is accusing me of, leaking info to enemy's of the leave village, murder, attempted murder, sabotage and I think there where some more- wait, I didn't introduce myself now did I? My name is Naruto Uzumaki, and you'll be reading my story of love, hate, jealousy and betraya-
"in the name of me! Just continue the me damned story brat!"
'right right, sorry kami! Now where were we? Ah yes, there we were'
"I won't execute a shinobi of the leave without a proper investigation! I will call the Dimyo for a proper investigation, and then will we see what happens! Until then, Genin Uzumaki, until proven innocent, you will stay in a cell in the T&I department for further questioning. ANBU, take him to Ibiki!"
Suddenly 2 pairs of strong arms grabbed the young Genin, and flickerd away. How did the little boy stumble into this situation? Simple, he brought the beloved Uchiha back to the village, after suffering two Chidori's to the chest. He brought him back and was stationed in a hospital for a couple days, until the council called a meeting. What was the meeting about? Some people with altitude and issues with him. After all, he almost killed the precious Uchiha, completely forgetting that he was still a traitor. Eather way once in his cell, Anko and Ibiki went to work. They broke bones, ripped of his nails and tortured him mentally by putting him in nightmareish genjutsu. After about 3 hours they left him alone in the darkness of his cell.
A couple hours later
"So, this is what happens when you complete a mission in this village huh, granny?" asked the young blond a shadow in his cell. Out of it came Tsunade holding a key. "How did- we'll talk later, I'm going to get you out of here Naruto. It's not save here at the moment. After you're out of here, you'll be staying with Jiraya until it's save again, alright?" she didn't wait for an answer and opened the door. She went out of the room, waiting for the little kid to say something, to hear him move, but nothing happened. Tsunade looked inside the cell again and saw Naruto comfortably sitting in the chair that he was tortured in, seemingly not even feeling pain. "What are you waiting for gaki? An extra invitation? Comon move your ass!".
He only looked up to her, and started talking. "Tsunade, do you know what the qualitys of a shinobi are?" before she could manage to say anything, he continued "A shinobi is supposed to be unpredictable, agile, skilled and most importantly, cunning-" "Yea yea, what are you on about? We don't have enough time for this!" Tsunade interrupted. "But Lady Hokage, we have all the time of the world." Naruto awnsered with a smirk on his face "After all, I'm not even here". As if on command Naruto started so melt into a red substance, slowly from his legs up "after all, the real Naruto knew that this would happen, so he left and went rouge.". Tsunade Was stunned to say the least. He knew that the village would betray him, he knew that all this would happen. "Then why did you leave? We would have gotten you out, you still would be a shinobi of Konoha, you would've been able to become Hokage!". "Oh realy? You still belive that a village like this would except me as Hokage? Do you realy think that I would become Hokage when they can have the Uchiha or littery anyone else? I'm tired of this village and how I'm treated, I'm tired of having a mask protect me. Have a pleasant night M'lady, and hopefully we will never see each other ever agai-" 'Narutos' speech was cut short as his head finally disintegrated along the rest of his body.
Tsunade flinched at the sight of the big red puddle that was now at her feet. She tried to process what had happened, only to be hit by the smell of iron. "Anbu!" 3 clocked people dropped from the sealing, kneeling to their Hokage "Tell the search teams to look for Naruto, and get someone take some samples of this substance to my lab!". The three shinobi didn't make a sound as they flickered away to carry out their orders.
With Naruto
The young blond was on a large ship out on the sea, so far away that you couldn't see the elemental nations anymore. He was happy with himself, finally free, finally away from the place that hated him for existing, the place that wanted him dead.
Naruto took out a small peace of paper from his new black jacket and turned it around, showing that it was a picture of a beautiful red haird woman. She wore a Jonin body armor over a white and blue shirt. She wore black anbu styled pants and wore shinobi sandels. Naruto looked at the picture with longing, as if he wanted to just jump into the picture and hug the woman. He brushed his hair back with his hand, somehow changing his iconic sun kissed blond hair to blood red.
'I'll make you proud mother, I'll make sure that the legecy you left me with will live, no matter what. I will make everybody remember our clan, and why they feared us.' he vowed. The red head now looked out to the horizon and cringed instantaneous 'Note to me, never make a vow while on see, as it attracts bad stuff'. He seald the picture into his wrist and ran over to the bow if the ship, where he found a crew member of the ship "A big storm is coming from starboard! A big one!" the guys eyes widen as he looked over the right side of the boat and saw the big black spot on the horizon "FUCK, go below deck, this will get ugly!"
Naruto POV
And ugly did it get. Why? Cause the ship is slowly braking apart. The moment I heard the wind outside, the waves angrily clash against the ship and had gotten the gut feeling, I packed and sealed everything up on some part of my body, took a couple soldier pills and took out the breething device that many ninja from Kumo used to breath under water. I waited until I saw that the ship won't make it, and decided to try my best against mother nature. I opened the hatch and went over to the port side, took the little breathing device in my mouth and jumped deep into the dark depths of the ocean, and tried my best to swim in the general direction that we were sailint to, somewhere in the west of Kumogakure, to the lands that the sailors wanted to go to.
Please tell me honestly how the rewrite feels and if the chapter kinda feels to short and to fast. Also, was everything understandable? I want to make this book clear and enjoyable, so please tell me you hostest opinion
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Atomic Devastation
FanfictionWhat if naruto was neglected? what if he was betrayed and found out the truth about his friends? what if he had an kekai genkai that allows him to change to a atomic level? what if he never had Kurama? what if he found a facility of the times before...
