Ethan had just turned 21 and was moving away to college.
Ethan is finally going to college after a 4 hour drive Ethan was really nervous he just sat in a car for 15 minutes trying to put him self back together. After Ethan got it all under control he started walking to the front office. Ethan bumps into someone and drops all of his things. He looks up and see's these Beautiful brown eyes Ethan looked away to start picking up the things that had fallen and touched hands with him.
Ethan- sorry about that
Grayson- I'm sorry I bumped into you
Ethan- it all fine
Grayson- bye! again so sorry
Ethan- what's your name. (Grayson has walk far and could hear him anymore)
Ethan got to the front office and told the receptionist his name and his room number.
They gave Ethan the keys to his dorm room. Ethan open up the door and sees nobody in the dorm
Ethan starts unpacking his things and his roommate opened the door
"Ethan with his back turned" hey I'm your new roommate I just moved in today. My names Grayson Dolan.
Ethan turns back and sees the same guy he bumped into.
Grayson- uh hi I'm Grayson are you the one from the morning
Ethan- yeah
Grayson- Again I'm so sorry I bumped into do you want me to help you unpack or something
Ethan- No it's fine
Grayson- no it's fine I owe you from this morning come on
Ethan- No I swear it all fine I go this but thanks for asking
Grayson just moves Ethan aside and says let me just help you please
Ethan- fine. thank you for helping me. Where can I find the showers?
Grayson- ohh let me tell you where to go ohh actually I can just show you in come with me
Ethan- ok I'll be behind you
Ok so this is the community shower. We don't have any other showers I come to shower at 7am people don't wake up at that time. Ethan and Grayson head back to there room. Ethan finished unpacking all his thing and fell asleep
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