Like seriously, stop with the Mary Sue shit. It's pissing me off. I'm not gonna name stories but I've read 100 too many stories where the OC can kill 15 titans in 10 minutes. Dude, that's not fucking possible calm your tits and sit your ass back down. I don't care if you are a fucking kawaii ass mother fucker or your stronger than levi or whatever shitty excuse you have, I. AM. NOT. ACCEPTING YOU! BOOK QUIT. IM OUT. PEACE.
Levi killed two titans and it took him about ehh 10-20 minutes. He is humanities strongest soldier. Let me say it again.
HUMANITIES, ALL OF HUMAN KIND- STRONGEST. SOLDIER.
Did you get that or are you fucking blind? Like, what the fuck.
Oh, and stop making your oc's stronger than levi, I'm just- like, no. Bitch. Stop right there. I don't care how much traumatising shit you've been through your not stronger than levi.
Like bitch you better calm your ass down. Sit back down you ass licking motherfucker.
Stop making your character the most loved character ever, like what. There is no fucking way, everyone loves you. If everyone loved you, you'd have to have atleast a few jealous bitches somewhere like come on. Life is not that easy.
Don't make them emotionless and as rude as levi and shit too. Like, that is just a girl version of levi minus the need to have everything clean. THATS NOT ORIGINAL YOUR A BASIC BITCH STILL.
Okay, whatever. Also, I don't fucking want to see your oc have a magical power, I know that we have transformers in aot but magic is not- just- just- just stop okay. There was one story where the reader could fly. FUCKING. FLY.
FLY?! LIKE BITCH WHAT?! AND I THOUGHT THE JUMPING AND EXTREME SPEED WAS MUCH BUT SHE CAN FLY?! THATS JUST DANDY!
And I shoulda known that there was something up cause the writing style was actually pretty good, it had magic and stuff but I let it slid a but because the writing style was nice and I saw my comments that's how I knew I already read it I was like,"I've already read this? Why didn't I finish it?" Then I saw the next paragraph and I was like."oh. That's why."
Everyone was like, wtf she can fly, too. Like, okay. Just, no.
Don't have Mary Sue shit in you stories, I did this by accident and I deleted the story.
Bye
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