Red Leader ~ Tori x Female Y/N ~ Ellsworld Fanfiction

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(I would recommend listening to the music above while you read the text below, because it adds a comedic value of elevator music while you wait for the actual story to begin)

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Okay, so a few things before we jump into the story;

1. This Fanfiction is not about the genderbend of Tord Larsson (the real person). This is strictly about the character .

2. In no way, shape, or form do I condone the romanticism of war, violence, murder, or otherwise depicted in this fan-fiction. I am not trying to glorify anything about these tragedies, instead I want to focus on the Y/N character being enticed by Tori's dominance (that being in regards to her personality and power) and also the adrenaline that they get addicted to feeling.

3. This concept is not directly copying from any specific stories/fan-fictions, any resemblance is purely coincidental. (If someone claims to have came up with the idea before me and that I have "copied" them, I wrote a first draft of this story idea on June 26th of 2020, further evidence of this can be provided if desired.)

4. All basic copyright laws apply to this story, and distribution of this work for profit or for personal usage is prohibited unless given special permission by the author (me).

5. By the time I get this posted, it will be Christmas morning (albeit 12 in the morning). So... Merry Christmas to all who celebrate! Happy holidays to those that partake in other celebrations of this time! Or if you don't take part in any of the festivities, I still wish you a very good day/night :)

6. Although this is a Female Y/N story, I not only identify as male, but if enough request is given for a non-gender specific version of this tale, I will gladly post another story for those in the audience who are not female identifying (it should be identical to this one, apart from some minor tweaks obviously.)

7. All pages will have a YouTube video on the top so you can listen to the accompanying music that I feel fits the overall feel/vibe of the selected portion, although listening is optional! (I also would recommend that rather than listening to it while reading, listen to it before or afterwards due to most of the songs containing lyrics.)

8. I am always open to constructive criticism. 

Examples of things that are not constructive:

 "I don't like this!!!!"

"THIS IS SOOOOOOO BAD!!!!1!!1 >:(((((("

"Fix this."

"Learn to write"

A more effective way of helping me in the case of the first example would be explaining to me why you don't like it (and saying "Everything!" isn't a sufficient answer.) Perhaps you don't like my repetitive usage of a word, or maybe there's a tense change halfway through the paragraph, or it's as big of an issue of my story moving too quickly. Don't get me wrong, I'd love to know your opinions! I just would like to know what I can do to better not only the story, but my writing skills in general! 

As for the comment saying "Fix this", that is very vague and doesn't tell me what you think needs fixing! Please clarify further if you're going to request that I change something.

And lastly, "Learn to write" is generally just a disrespectful comment. I'm still learning new things about the literary arts every day! There's no point where we stop learning and growing, not to mention as my bio states, I am specifically taking a governor's school program on writing. 

Alright, that's all for now! Enjoy the story! <3

-Ray