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This story is very short and bad. I wrote it when I was younger so its not as good. Vomment (Vote and comment)

The doorknob turned, it slowly opened. This was the second time this week that the door had done this. It opens very slowly and then closes as fast as possible when I get close. The door is so small that my 5-year-old brother couldn’t fit in it. I walked towards the door and peeked my head in, I had a routine by now. I would look in and there would be nothing, then I would walk away and it would creek open a little bit more. I looked in… and again nothing so I went back up stairs and could hear it creaking open. I ignored it and left.

It happens every time no one except me is home, the door opening and other strange things. Whenever I am home alone the door opens and closes and other weird noises come from the basement where the door is. They are all noises that I have never heard before, ones that sounds like they come from nowhere.

I live with my mom and my 5-year-old brother Eddy in a huge house on the corner of the longest street in Brockville. And this week my mom and brother are away. I have to stay home by myself to go to school. I’m hoping to figure out what is behind the door. So tomorrow I will get up early and start my day investigating the door before school.

When I woke up I ran down stairs and grabbed breakfast. Once I was done I got a net, some old pepper spray my mom had lying around and a box, than ran down stairs to the door.

The door was open when I went down. But when I got close enough to see a glimpse inside the door it slammed shut. I walked so close that I could see something, but I couldn’t tell what. It looked like a bunny in strange way. I stuck the net in a moved it around and suddenly and unexpectedly I was pulled in. Well as much as I could be since I was too big for the door.

The next thing I knew I was tied up to a pole and these things were bringing me somewhere on the poles. They looked like a bunny with horns on the top of their head, and a stinger on the end of a long tail.

I had no clue where they were taking me and I didn’t even know where I was! I was so low to the ground that my back was dragging on and my hair was touching the ground. They suddenly stopped and dropped me. I was still foggy like I had just been knocked out and my head hurt, so I tried to ask what was going on. Either they don’t know how to talk English or they totally ignored me because they didn’t answer.

They untied me and put me in a cage. I fidgeted with the rope and grabbed the pepper spray. I jumped up and caught the little things attention. When they turned around I sprayed them. They fell without a sound. I then grabbed my pocketknife that had been in my back pocket the whole time and cut the cage.

I started walking around until another guard noticed me, so I distracted him with a question. “Why am I here?” He actually answered me. “Because you know about the door, and now you must die.” His answer startled me, DIE! I was about to die and I couldn’t think of anything to do to save me! “How did I fit in the door?” I said to him quickly back so he couldn’t see my fear. “We gave you our shrinking potion. We also have a growing potion!” The he put me in a new cage. I had to think of a plan. When they all go to bed I will sneak out. That would work!

That night I waited forever for them to go to bed so I could get out of my cage and leave, but they never did! They stay up all night. That means that I will have to think of something else. I still had my net, pepper pray, oh wait that got taken away. Ok so I still have my net, box and pocketknife. I will just simply catch all the strange animals.

I squeezed through the bars of the cage and grabbed my net. I pulled out my box and as soon as I did it went back to its normal size! It was huge, big enough that I could fit all the animals in there if I can catch them. I grabbed my net, but since I was holding it when I was shrunk it was as small as me, the perfect size to catch each animal by itself.

I went off. The first one I caught was hard, seeing as they are fast, but as I went it got easier. I got more and more until my box was almost filled. Until the last one, the master who held the potion so that I could return home and be my normal size.

He was strong I almost couldn’t defeat him. I grabbed my net and placed it over his head, putting him under my net, but he burst out. He hit me really hard and knocked me out. I think I was out for at least 10 minutes and when I got up all the animals were out of the box and surrounding me.

I grabbed my net and held the mesh part of it. Then I swung it around hitting all the animals into the box. Once I hit the leader and both the potions went flying! I didn’t know which was witch so I grabbed one and took a little sip and I shrank a little more. I ran out of the door while carrying the box and then drank the other potion. I grew up to my fill size and maybe even a little taller.

I grabbed the box and ran out the door to the exterminator, put the box down, rang the doorbell and ran. I watched from behind the bush while he opened the door and took the box. I don’t know what happened next because I left, but I think he is fine because I saw him the other day on the street.

The doorknob turned, it slowly opened. This was the second time this week that the door had done this. It opens very slowly and then closes as fast as possible when I get close, and this is the last time it will happen.

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⏰ Last updated: Mar 23, 2011 ⏰

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