Who is this boy?

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*MADDIES POV*

          I listened to the boys screaming at eachother. I'v come to know the curly haired boys name is Danny, the other, Paul. Paul had went to see Danny's girlfriend without Danny knowing. Paul keeps screaming his girlfriend has feelings for Paul. Soon they both come in the room. "Maddie, whats your favorite food?" Danny asks me. "Chicken?" i ask more than answer. "dammit maddison, your a vegetarian!!!!" he shrieks. i jump a bit. "Whats our middle name?" Paul asks. i think. "Lynn?" i ask. he sighs. "She remembers that." Paul says. Danny throws a punch to the wall putting a large hole in the plaster. a doctor walks in. "EXPLAIN TO ME WHY SHE DOESNT REMEMBER ANYTHING!" Danny screams. "she must have hit hear head when she went into shock. we dont think its perminant. we can let her go now. try to do things that she did alot, or say thing or take her places she would remember." the doctor says. i look at him confused. "Im not going with these people, i dont know them." i say. Danny pulls me up from the bed. "i'll get you to remember me." he says pulling me from the room.

*DANNY'S POV*

        I look over at my beautiful Maddie sitting in the pasanger seat of my car. She's pale and afraid. shes afraid of me. "Maddie do you remember who sings this song?" i ask her. i put in a CD of "Hold you" theres a different expression on her face. she starts to sing along to the song. "A band...i- i dont rmember who." she says. But she remembered the song.  this makes me smile as i drive her home.

        i take her inside and straight to the kitchen making popcorn. Nutella and Popcorn. she had to remember doing this with me. she had to.

*MADDIES POV*

        Who sang that song? i swear i knew it. i stare off into space as a vision of me laying in bed cuddled up to someone. i cant see his face. i hear a beep and snap out of my thoughts. Danny pulls out a bag of pop corn and a jar of nutella and starts to eat. i take a piece sticking it into the chocolate and pop it into my mouth. another vision. i was smiling at the same boy, but i still, couldnt see his face. i start to shake. "Maddie whats wrong?" Danny asks. "w-who are you? why are you trying to get me to remember things and people who i'v never met or seen." i say trembling. Danny starts to cry. "im begging you Maddison." He begs. i shake my head. "im sorry. i really dont know who you are." i say. Danny smiles. "Come with me." he says. i hesitate. "im going to take you somewhere, i promise you, you'll love it. you'll remember me." he says picking me up and rushing outside.

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