Silenced

Chapter 1:Family deaths

{PENELOPE'S P.O.V.}
*Gun shots* *muffled screams* As i crawled down the old brown creaky stairs trying not to get caught, i saw three tall muscular men in a black. Two took away two motionless bodies. While the third held a big and heavy loooking gun. "M-mom br-ian, where are you guys?, this is a joke...right?" I questioned. I ran down the old stairs hoping those men didn't take my family. Sadly i was wrong. Seeing my mother and brother laying on the ground, lifeless was the worst experience. It was all my fault, i should've called the cops when i heard the gun shots or even the muffled screams. Now i just lay in silence thinking about all the memories of my childhood and nowadays. What now? I thought. My brother and i were twins, we did everything together. Now im off living with my drug and alcohol addicted father that wont even notice me. This is not the first time a family member dies. Emma my supposed to be baby sister died after my father brutally abused my mother out of nearly nowhere. Thats when they split. When my depression began, when my bestfriend, Emily was my biggest and most loving support. Tomorrow i have to face the real cruel world, without my caring mother and loving brother.

Hey guys, so this is the first chapter in this "book" and im not to sure if I like it or not, and i know its short i promise to make it longer next time. I would really appreciate some suggestions and comments about the story.
Xx-Melanie♡