Showers that are British ( A Louis Tomlinson FanFic)

Chapter 2

Vanessa P.O.V

I can't believe it! Louis is coming back!! His actually coming back!!! I ran towards my bathroom and took a quick shower. I put on white shorts, a white tank top, a purple and white varsity jacket, purple and white toms, and curled my long brown hair, which made it look shorter than usual. I looked at myself in the mirror and smiled, my blue eyes twinkling with excitement. I ran downstairs to see my mum cooking breakfast. She looked up and smiled,"I see your dressing nice for Louie." She winked I rolled my eyes and got my car keys. "Don't go! Go eat first!" She said, I nodded and sat down. As she put the bacon and eggs on my eggs, I instantly got a fork and started to eat like a pig. "Slow down child!" My mum said, I giggled and are slower than a turtle. "Oh, Vanessa. What wouldn't I do without you?" She asked smiling. I giggled and ate a little bit more faster.

After eating I grabbed my keys and headed towards the door. "Wait Vanessa." My mum said grabbing my head, "Here this was my mum's." she said putting a necklace on my neck. "Mum-" she cut my of and said, "Go now." She smiled and I hugged her. "I love you mum." I stated. She smiled and I headed towards my white car. I turned it on the engine and the song, 'Glad You Came' by the wanted came up. I really loved the band. They were great. Anyways, I turned left, than right, straight, left, left, and than right again. And there was the house were I first met the boy of my life.

"Vanessa! Come in! Come in!" Louis' mum, Johanna, said. "Hi Jay!" I said hugging her. "Oh, you look stunning!" She said looking at me head to toe. "You are to!" I stated looking at her blue dress. She was really stunning. "Thank you honey! How's mum?" She asked leading me to the Living room." She's fine.. Still working her ass off I mean butt." I said realizing I couldn't curse around Johanna (or Jay). "You can curse. But not around the girls!" She said laughing I smiled and nodded. "Where are the girls?" I asked looking around. "There at Girl Scouts." She said smiling. I smiled and heard the door bell ring." His here!" I say running towards the door, I heard laughing behind me but I ignored it. I opened the door and I saw Louis and... His girlfriend Eleanor....

"Anessa!!!" Louie said hugging me. I didn't hug back I just stood there. Frozen. He said that its just me and him. Was he leaving Eleanor with his mum? "What's wrong Anessa?" Louis asked breaking away. "Oh.. Nothing." I smiled weakly and let Johanna hug Louis and shake Eleanor's hand. Louis glanced at me and smiled, I smiled sadly. And I knew he could see it I turned away and went back to the living room to text my mum. I guess he couldn't stay away from Eleanor. Or Eleanor couldn't stay away for Louie.

Louis' P.O.V

When I came home, I expected Vanessa to be happy. But he looked glum when she saw me here. Was she expecting someone else? "Babe, who is she?" Eleanor looked at her like she was something to eat. And by her I meant Vanessa. "She's my bestfriend don't do anything." I saw, she smiled an evil smile and walked away. I sighed loudly and sat next to Vanessa who was texting. "Hey.. You ready for just the two of us and Eleanor and.... Zayn?" I asked. I had to ask Zayn and El to come so El won't feel left out. She nodded and continued texting. I sighed. What was wrong with Vanessa? Did I do something wrong?

Vanessa P.O.V

While we were walking around the carnival we got some 'OMG IT'S LOUIS TOMLINSON' looks. Eleanor and Louie lead and me and Zayn were at the back. "So.. What's your name?" He asked. "Vanessa Conrad" I say smiling , "but people call me Anessa for short." We had a weird funny conversation for about 5 minutes and every time I laughed or giggled I could see Louis tense up and turn around. "So.. How's it going down there?" Louie asked. "Fine. How's it going up there?" Zayn said in a girly voice, I laughed and Louie turned around to face us. "Fine. Lets split up. Zayn you go with Eleanor. I'll go with Vanessa." He said sternly. "But babeee!! I wanna go with you!" Eleanor said holding on to his hand." El-" before he could say anything else I said, "It's fine. I can see Eleanor wants some time with you to. So, I can go with Zayn." I said and smiled weakly. Zayn looked at me and he knew why I was weak. He sighed and we walked away.

"It's ok." He said. "What's ok?" I asked. "Louie." He stated. All I could say was an oh. We rode a few roller coasters and went to get ice cream." You deserve more than Louie." He mumbled, I smiled at kissed his cheek. He blushed and looked at me. "Thanks Zayn.. For the most awesomest day ever!" I said hugging him he hugged back and I let go. Zayn's a really sweet guy.

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A/N: is it long enough? Or should I make it longer? Comment and vote