Hey guys,i am here with a new story.
Story starts when evil veer comes out from veer's ring.and he was sitting in the mandir...
Scene starts
Veer: eye kya ho raha hai aur kyu ho raha hai mere saath...saab ko lagta hai ki mein badal gaya hoon..lekin koi eye nahi janna chahta hai ki kyun...kaise batau sabko..ki mere baas mein kuch bhi nahi ...i am helpless..kitna kosis kiya ki sabko bacha sakkon musibaato se...portal of death ko khulne se rokh sakoon ...paar nahi rokh paya ...kaise bachau saab ko jaab ki sabse bara villian mere hi andar hai... professor jaise logo ko toh haar roj hara sakoon par khudke andar k burai ko kaise harao.....eye kaisi larai hai bagwaan ...ish ladai mein toh haar surat pe srif mere hi haar hai...kaise is duniya ko bachau uss shukhrase kiya karron mein... please koi rasta dikhaiye
Just then suddenly all the bells of mandir starts ringing...and veer sees a shadow... coming towards him and he looks at that person
Person: kisne kaha ki tu sukhra ko nahi hara sakta kisne kaha tere baas mein kuch nahi hai...veer tu sabkuch kaar sakta hai...baas tujhe apne andar jhank k dekhne ki zarrorat hai...tujhe mahadev ne chuna hai...aisehi nahi chuna tha...yaad rakhna ...aur maine tujhe kya sikhaya ..bhool gaya...bol arreh bol na veer
Veer was shocked after seeing the person and hearing all those things... actually shock would be underestimate
Veer: tu..nahi eye nahi ho sakta...koun ho tum?
Person: itni jaldi bhool gaya mujhe? Chalo koyi nahi yaad dilata hoon... shivaye naam yaad karlo kaam ayega
Veer : nahi eye kaise ho sakta hai...tujhe toh sukhra ne..toh tu eya kaise...eye jhooth hai na?
Shivaye: nahi veer sach hai eye...tujhe kya laga aise picha chor dunga tera ..betelal aise kaise...aur uss shukhra pe itna daam nahi hai ki woh mujhe apne paas rakh sakhe samjha
Veer went to him and hugged him ..he was crying after sometime he clammed down
Shivaye: baas kar veer kyu ro raha hai..baccha hai kya..aur tu kyun ro raha hai...rone k bari toh uss shukhra ki hai...teri nahi samjha? Nahi chorenge uss sukhra k bacche ko
Veer: shivaye saab log mujhe galat samaj rahe hai...sab ko lagta hai ki mein galat hu mein jaan bujkar karraha hoon sab kuch jabki mere baas mein kuch nahi hai
Shivaye: veer eye ladhai tujhe ladhna parega...or tu halahaal ko hara sakhta hai...tujme woh power hai veer ...tu kaar sakta hai ..aur ek baat..har sikke ki do pehelu hota hai...waise hi burai aur acchai dono hote ..baas tu kaise dekh raha hai uspe depend karta hai...aur tujhe jitna hoga veer ...samaj raha hai na tu
Veer nodded..and shivaye smiled
Shivaye: chal chalte hai eyahase .
Veer: ek second shivaye tu toh shukhra k kaid mein tha na...phir ..matlab tu kaise yaha
Shivaye: bataunga saab pehele saabse mille.? Mujhe zara ,bantu , amal papa sabse milna ha
Hearing about zara veer got emotional
Shivaye: kya hua tujhe muh kyu latka ke khada hua hai
Veer: zara nahi rahi hamare bich
Shivaye: kya bakwass karraha hai...zara kaise ..kya hua tha
Veer narrated him each and every incident after he was kidnapped.Shivaye was shocked he don't know what to say.He just hugged veer because he knows how much zara was important to veer.
Shivaye: accha chal...baki sabse milte hai...
Veer: papa nahi hai woh apne research k liye kahi gaye hai
Shivaye: ok..aur bantu? Woh toh hai
Veer narrated him about their fight
Shivaye: betelal mein kuch din nahi tha toh tune toh sabse panga le liya..chal saab sudharta hoon
Veer and shivaye went to sidhwani house but bantu was not there...so shivaye meets with other members.
Veer: sweety meethi bantu kaha hai?
Sweety: nahi aye woh abhi taak
Shivaye: kaha gaya hoga woh
Veer : pata nahi
Shivaye: veer mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai ...chal tere room mein
Veer: chal
In veer room
Shivaye: veer mujhe lagta hai ki bantu sahi keh raha tha... dekh veer ..maine sukhra ko suna tha...ki woh yahi earth mein ake kuch karne wala tha...aur bantu ka uss ladki pe sakh hona bohot bada sabut hai
Veer : thik hai ek kaam karte hai uske ghar pe jaake dekhte hai
Shivaye nodded ..then they went to yakhsini and dr ayush house..veer was about to ring the bell
Shivaye: betelal kya karraha hai tu? Pagal wagal ho gya kya? Apna dimaag kaha chor ke aya hai
Veer : bell nahi bajayenge toh andar kaise jaiyenge
Shivaye: chupke se...bell bajayenge toh unhe sakh nahi hoga
Veer: arreh ha
Shivaye: boss dekh rahe ho na
Veer: accha accha thik hai ...chal ab
They went inside as the door was open and whatever they saw inside just made them shocked..they saw shukhra and yakhsini torturing bantu...
Veer: shukhra kya karraha hai tu kamine.
Shukhra: areh veer tum yaha..toh tumhe pata chal hi gaya ...hamari yojna ke bare mein chalo koi nahi...abh tumhe aur tumhare is saathi ko haam apne hato se marenge or eye anguthi hamari hogi
Shivaye: itna asan nahi hai shukhra...tujhe kya laga tu asani se jit jayega nahi ...mei tujhe jitne hi nahi dunga
Shukhra:tujhe toh humne swayam apne kaid mein rakha tha tu yaha kaise
Shivaye: mahadev ka bhaqt hoon itni asani se haar nahi manoonga...aur unhone meri madad ki samjha..mein bata ta hoon kaise pohocha mein yaha
(Flashback: shivaye Venus pe tha..aur kaise khudko azad karega soch raha tha...he was seeking help to mahadev ..tabhi ek asur ata hai shivaye k pass aur usse free karta hai
Asur: chale jao eyaha se
Shivaye: par tum meri madat kyu karrahe ho?
Asur: ek din tumne meri madat ki thi meri jaan bachaye the ..mein baas usika karz chuka raha hoon
Shivaye: sukhriya
With the help of that asur shivaye came here but after coming back on earth shivaye realize he has got his power back)
Shivaye: dekha shukhra achai aj bhi zinda hai tujh jaisa burai ka baas jaha pe hai waha pe bhi acchai hai..toh mera veer kaise harega...nahi sukhra harega toh tu...
Shukhra: shivayeee tujhe toh hum nahin chorenge and he uses his power but shivaye saved himself by using his power
Veer also uses his power and defeat yakhsika and frees bantu
Then shivaye and veer started fighting with shukhra and eventually shukhra lost and he died. As shukhra dies so the power of halahaal also finished .
Bantu comes to veer and hugs him
Veer hugs him back
Veer: sorry bantu ...pata nahi kya kya bol diya tujhe maaf kar de bhai
Bantu: nahi bacchi woh tu nahi tere andar ka halahaal bol raha tha...ab saab thik hai. ...aur itni asani se tujhe nahi chorunga tune na bantu bhai k special subscription lihai..samjha...ab chor purane bato ko and broke the hug ..then he goes to shivaye they both hug each other
They came back to sidhwani house and narrated everything to mama, sweety and meethi
Mama: chal mein khush hoon ab saab thik ho gaya ..aur veer ab na tu baas apna kheal rakh samjha ..
Veer nodded and they share a group hug.
Next morning ,veer, bantu and shivaye goes for outing and doing masti with eachother.
On the other side , sweety meethi practicing dance just then the bell rings sweety goes and opens the door and gets shocked+excited
Sweety: Papaa ap aa gaye and hug him
Amal : ha beta mein aa gaya ..he kisses sweety and meethi also comes there and hugs amal
Amal: baccho veer kaha hai?
Sweety: woh shivaye aur bantu bhai k saath bahar gaye hai
Amal : shivaye?
Meethi : ha shivaye wapas aa gaya ..she tells amal what happened here when he was not there
Amal: mujhe laga ki mein hi surprise dunga tum logo ko paar tum logo ne bhi mujhe surprise kiya
Meethi : kaisa surprise papa?
Amal: pata chal jayega ek baar tumhare mama aa jaye phir dekhna
Just then ranjit entered in the house.
Ranjit: jijaji woh aa gayi hai
Sweety: kaun aa gayi hai?
Amal : khud hi dekhlo ...bets andar aa jao
Just then a girl enters in the house
Sweety meethi got shocked
Meethi: aap ...lekin aap toh mar chuki thi na?
Amal: nahi meethi woh zinda hai...kuch logone isse bacha liya tha...
Sweety meethi goes to her and hug her
Sweety: i missed you zara
Meethi: ha sachme zara...apke bina bohot adhura laag raha tha... infact bhaia bhi tuth chuke the ....paar ab app aa gayi ho na saab thik ho Jayega...dekhna
Sweety: ha zara...aur papa apko bhi hamne bohot miss kiya... infact bhaia ne bhi...woh batate nahi the magar unhone sabse jayada miss kiya apko....woh ekdom akela par gaye the.
Amal: beta ab saab thik ho jayega dekhna
Mama: accha bate hi karte rahoge eya veer shivaye bantu ko bhi bulaoge
Sweety: arreh ha...hum abhi call karte hai...
Meethi: unhe surprise karte hai...jaldi jaldi bulaenge ..phir call cut kar denge
Sweety: ok...then they called veer ..after sometime shiveerbantu come and
Veer : sweety meethi kya hua ...saab thik hai na itni jaldi mein kyu bulaya ...tum log thik ho na...
Bantu: ha kya hua hai...
Veer: kuch bolo na kya hua hai...dono chup karke kyu khare hue ho
Sweety: bolne doge toh bolenge na...
Meethi: infact bolenge nahi dikhayenge
Sweety meethi drags veer towards amal...veer gets emotional seeing amal ..he hugged him tightly
Veer: kaha chale gaye the ap papa...kyun ap hamesa mujhe chor k chale jate ho...papa pata hai kitna miss kiya .. please papa hamesha saath rahiye mere
Amal: beta mere taraf dekh...aur shun beta mein janta hoon..mujhe tujhe akela chor k nahi Jana chahiye tha par..mein agar nahi jata toh mein teri khusiya kaise wapas lata ..
Veer: matlab?
Amal : udhar dekh...kaun wapas ayi hai( pointing towards zara)
Veer sees zara and gets shocked , emotional he don't know how to react.... firstly shivaye his brother,best friend came back then his papa now his zara love of his life...till yesterday he was feeling alone...no one was there for him...now suddenly he gets all the happiness he goes towards zara and cupped her face... actually he wants to confirm that he is not dreaming...zara just hold his hand and veer hugged her and breakdown in her embrace..after sometime he composed himself
Veer : zara tum yaha kaise..i mean tum toh..nahi kaise ho sakta hai eya
Zara: shant ho jao veer ...mein wapas aa gayi hoon tumhare pass....aur tumhari zara hamesha tumhari saath rahegi...apne Hero ki Heroin banke and chuckled
Veer : tumhe rehna hogaa zara....mein tumhe kabhi mujhse dur nahi jane dunga kabhi bhi nahi
Zara: mein jaungi hi nahi
Bantu also comes there and hugged zara
Bantu: zaza tune na sahi nahi kiya tha samjhi...dobara aisa kabhi maat karna
Zara: sorry... but apne dost ko kuch hote huye toh nahi dekh sakti na mein...
Bantu: promise karo ki age kabhi chor kar nahi zaogi
Zara nodded and shivaye bantu zara shared a group hug
Veer (smiled ): par papa yeh sab hua kaise
Amal: mein bata ta hoon...mujhe ek call aya tha ki zara zinda hai..aur usko jisne bachaya tha uske paas Jake zara ko le ayu...but jaab mein waha pohocha zara waha nahi thi aur jis ne zara ko bachaya woh injured tha...phir mujhe pata chala ki zara nirbhaya asur k paas tha..phir kisi tarha mein zara ko le aya...
Veer: par papa apne mujhe bataya kyu nahi ish bare mein
Amal: kaise batata mein veer...tu itna saab pareshani se guzar raha tha...phir agar zara ko kuch ho zata toh tu aur tooth jata isiliye nahi bataya..iss bare mein shrif Ranjeet aur sandhya ko pata tha...sandhya ne meri madad ki thi
Meethi: toh papa mumma kaha hai woh kyu nahi ayi
Amal: usse uski farz nibhana hai baccho..apne ma ko maaf kar dena woh majbur hai... looking at veer..veer just nodded...
Bantu goes towards veer and whispered
Bantu: bacchi ab jaab thik ho raha hai saab toh kyun na tu apni heroine ko propose karde
Veer : paar abhi kaise saab hai
Bantu: arreh toh kya hua karde karde
Shivaye joins them
Shivaye: ha veer bol de apni dil ki baat ...
Veer: paar shivaye
Shivaye: abbeh bol na...par par kya laga k rakha hai...tu payar karta hai na usse? Toh payar kiya toh darna kya..veer smiles
Veer: zara mujhe tumse kuch kehna ha
Zara: ha veer bolo na
Veer: zara jabse tumhe dekha hai ..haar paal har lamha tumhe chaha hai....tumhe hamesa queen banak rakhna chaha hai...hamesa mere dil ki baat tumse kehne k khwaish mangi hai...zara jaab tum nahi thi...taab aisa laagta tha jaise saab kuch kho gaya mera...par ab tumhe dobara nahi kho sakta mein zara...i love you zara i really love you
Then he goes on his knees and
Veer: zara will you marry me? Kya tum mujse saadi karogi ?
Zara became emotional tear escape from her eyes
Bantu: zaza ha bolde...eye fattu aj propose kya hai dobara nahi kar payega
Sweety meethi: ha zaara ha bol do
Zara : i love you too veer aur ha veer mein tumse saadi karungi then they hug each other... everyone becomes happy
then amal goes towards shivaye and bantu and hugged them ..
Amal: mere sare bacche thik hai...khush hai..
Mama: chalo choro eye emotional baate ...saab thik ho gaya hai toh kyun na ek selfie liya jaye
Everyone smiles and nodded then they takes a selfie..and screen freezes on their smiling face.
I hope you like it and please ignore all the mistakes
Take care
