24 (Eleanor Flashback)

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So, this is one of the four flashback chapters. Enjoy!

-3rd person-

In Pennsylvania, there is a small, snooty little town called Rosewood. Everyone who lives there is practically millionaires. Living in this town, are six girls. Most people know them as Ali and Her Pretty Little Followers.

Eleanor and Hanna waited by the curb infront of the DiLaurentis' house waiting for Ali to return from her summer vacation.

"I hope she lays off the rude comments since we waited for her arrival." Hanna sighs.

"I don't know about that, but I'll always have your back Han." Eleanor smiled. They watched as the black Mercedes pulled up to their friend's house.

"Aww, you guys waited for me!" Alison smiled pulling the two of them into a hug.

"How was your vacation?" Hanna asked.

"How about I tell you guys in my room. My mom will get my bags." Ali smiled. She lead them through the house to her bedroom.

"How've you two been?" Ali questioned as the three of them sat in the plush chairs.

"Good." Hanna and Eleanor chorused.

"Put some weight on, Hefty Hanna?" Ali smirked poking Hanna's stomach. Ali always did this, ask Hanna about her weight. After her parents divorced, Hanna stress-ate and put on a great deal of weight. She was loosing weight now, just not Ali's way. Hanna was having success by converting to a vegaterian diet, but Ali thought it would be more effective to eat a whole bunch fatty stuff then through it up.

"Actually, she was just telling me that she lost 12 pounds last week." Eleanor stated while Hanna gave her a grateful smile.

"With my help, we could loose 20 pounds today." Ali sneered.

"It's unhealthy to loose weight so fast." Eleanor corrected.

"Healthy! Do I look like I care about healthy? I just want all of you to be the beautiful girls I know you could be. Got a retort for that Ellie Elephant?" Ali spat. Eleanor hated being called 'Ellie Elephant'. In 4th grade, the six of them went to the zoo, and an elephant started licking Eleanor's hair. Now, Ali called her that when ever she tried to stand up for herself. Only Eleanor and Spencer dared question Ali.

"I'm actually already back to just above normal weight for someone my height." Hanna whispered.

"That's gre-" El began before Alison cut her off.

"Normal weight isn't good enough Hanna, we have to be the skinniest to be the best." Ali pouted with fake sympathy.

"And she'll get there, in her own time." Spencer sneered. The other three girls had just entered the room.

"Sit!" Ali commanded and they all sat downn.

"Aria, tell Hanna that my weight-loss method is better." Ali said sharply.

"Actually, your method could lead to serious medical disease and addiction." Aria voiced.

"Ugh! Stop being smart! All of you, OUT! Give me time to unpack! We'll meet at Spencer's house for the sleepover later." Ali commanded. The 5 girls left the room and returned to the their houses.

7:00 at Spencer's House

"So, we get to sleep in the barn. It was just renevated." Spencer said once everyone had arrived.

"Good. You would have paid for no barn." Alison sneered.

"Guys let's just go." Emily said. The six of them walked out to them barn that had been renovated to be sort of like a cottage. Spencer got to live in it now that she was in Middle.

"You guys wanna do something cool?" Ali asked.

"What is it?" Aria asked.

"I've learned how I can hyponotise you guys." Ali smiled.

"Don't you say stuff you wouldn't normally say when your hyponotised?" Hanna asked nervously.

"Why? Does Hefty Hanna have a secret?" Ali asked. Hanna shook her head.

"Good. Let's do it!" Ali announced. When Ali suggesed something they always ended up doing it. Ali turned out the lights and sat the girls down in a circle. Then she lit a candle and set it in the center.

"I'm going to count down from 20 and when I'm done you will all be in my power." Ali said in a hypnotic voice.

"20"

"19"

"18"

"17"

"16"

"15"

"14"

"13"

"12"

"11"

"10"

"9"

"8"

"7"

"6"

"5"

"4"

"3"

"2"

"No Ali stop!" Spencer shouted standing up and turning the light on.

"The lights have to be off, turn them off Spence." Ali commanded.

"No. I'm sick and tired of you telling me what to do. I think the other girls agree with me too." Spencer said confidently.

"Well? Who agrees with the traitor?" Ali raised her eyebrows facing the other girls.

"Let's just go to sleep, it's late." Aria tried.

"Good Girl, Aria. I knew you would always agree with me." Ali smiled warmly.

"No, actually, most of the time I don't agree with you. I don't want to be hypontised. i didn't want to go swimming in the lake where they found a dead body. i don't want to do most of the stuff you make us do. And I sure don't want to be bossed around by you." Aria voiced.

"TRAITORS! YOU"RE ALL JUST A BUNCH OF TRAITORS! I made you into what you are now. Hanna would still be the girl who all of the boys laugh at. Emily would still be the girl who never talked to a single boy. Spencer would still be the goody-two-shoes who no one liked. Aria would still be the girl who carried around a puppet. And Eleanor. You would still be the girl who wore princess dresses to school. I fixed you all back in 3rd grade and this is how you repay me?" Ali cried.

"We didnt need you to fix us, we were in 3rd grade for god's sake!" Eleanor said.

"I'm going to go outside for thirty seconds. When I come back, you can all decide if you want to remain my friend or plumet back to unpopularity." Ali said calmy and stepped out onto the porch.

"We can't just cut the string. No one will like her cuz she was so mean to them all these years." Emily reasoned.

"Yeah, she's right." Aria sighed.

"Well let's tell her want to be friends, but if she tries to boss us around, we won't listen." Eleanor said.

"Do we all promise that we won't let her control us anymore and we'll stand up for ourselves?" Spencer asked.

'We prom-" we all started but suddenly we heard a scream outside.

"Ali? Ali are you ok?" Eleanor cried as they all ran outside. They saw a figure carrying Ali off in the distance. Aria, Hanna, Spencer, Emily, and Eleanor never saw or heard from Ali again.

So, that was the Eleanor flashback! Next chapter will be the Perrie flashback. VOTE, COMMENT, AND FAN!

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