I Can't Help If My Awesome-ness Overwhelms You! (Prussia x Reader)

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DISCLAIMER: I, CrazyBritishGirl, do not own Hetalia or any of the characters. They come from the brilliant mind of Hidekaz Himaruya and I do not profit by writing this story.

AAH! My first story on Wattpad! So don't hate me if it's terrible 'kay? I'm still getting used to all of this...so sorry if it sucks.

And also, if I get any information wrong in this story or anything please -if anyone even reads this- point it out and I'll correct it.

Constructive criticism is highly appreciated but compliments are appriciated even more!

Now, I should stop rambling and start with the first page/chapter thingy...

It was just an ordinary day for Gilbert and his two best friends, Francis and Antonio. It was Monday, they had just got to school, they were bored, yeah. They were checking out girls, as per usual, when you walked into the hallway. Gilbert couldn't help but stare. You were obviously new, but you certainly didn't act like it, you were talking to the other students as if you had beed going there for years! But why was Gilbert so interested? Was it the way the sunlight bounced off of you (h/c) locks? Or the way your eyes shined when you smiled at people? Or was it just the way that you were so comfortable, so confident, in your own skin? Francis and Antonio noticed Gilbert staring and looked over at you, too. "She is very...hot, no?" Francis said, eyeing you. "Si, very hermoso[1]" Antonio said. "I am going to speak to her!" Gilbert declared, walking over to you. But, as fate should so have it, just as he was in a four foot radius of you, the blasted bell rang and the three had to go to their first class...Algebra.

After Algebra, the Bad Touch Trio went to the only other class they had together, Geography. They walked into the class and noticed that they were painfully early. There was only one other student in the class, not even the teacher was there yet! Then they noticed who that other student was. That student was you. They smirked at each other and started walking over to you. You didn't notice them since you were listening to music on your cellphone with your headphones in. Francis reached your desk first right at the very back of the room. He tried talking to you, but when he got no response, he tapped you on the shoulder. You jumped slightly and looked up, taking your headphones out and putting your phone down. "You are in this class very early, cherie." he said, looking at you. "Oh, yes, well I didn't want to get lost so as soon as my class let out, I came straight here." you stated. "No, I bet the reason you came here early was to bask in my complete awesome-ness!" Gilbert stated loudly. "Um, no. I don't even know you." you said, confused. "You don't know me?!" Gilbert said, "You've heard of me though, right?" You shook your head "No, sorry, I've never heard of you." "Frau, I am the one, the only, Gilbert Beilschmidt! I am the most awesome guy who ever lived!" "Whatever floats your boat, buddy." you mumbled. "Anyway, I am Antonio Fernandez Carriedo." Antonio said, smiling. "And, I am Francis Bonnefoy." Francis stated, grabbing your hand and kissing it. "U-um." you stuttered, pulling your hand away, a tiny bit freaked out. "I'm (First Name) (Last Name) it's nice to meet you?" "The pleasure is all yours." Gilbert said. Just as you were about to smack some sense into the ego maniac, the bell rang. All the students and the teacher filed into the room and the lesson began.

School went by quickly after that. Geography, music, lunch, art, sports, English literature, science, chemistry and then the day ended. As Gilbert and the others were walking through the parking lot towards Gilbert's car, he noticed you. He couldn't look away as you climbed into your car and drove away. He carried on watching your car until he could see it no more...then he walked into a rubbish bin. He pulled a banana peel off of his head and glared at his laughing friends. "Ooh, Gilly likes (First Name)!" Antonio teased. "I-I do NOT!" Gilbert protested, blushing slightly. "Look at you! You're blushing! You never blush!" Francis said, cracking up again. "Shut up!" Gilbert hissed, getting ready to hit his French friend. "So what if I do like (First Name) a little? There's nothing funny about it." Gilbert grumbled. "Oh, but mi amigo, EVERYTHING about it is funny!" Antonio laughed, earning a glare from Gilbert. "You like her, and she is completely un-interested!" Francis said, still laughing. "If you want a ride home, you two had better stop laughing...that is, unless you WANT to walk home?" Gilbert asked innocently, with a slight hint of menace hidden under his tone. That shut them up. "Besides," Gilbert said, "She will like me...I'LL MAKE SURE OF IT!" he shouted, earning a few weird looks from the remaining students. Gilbert climbed into the car and started the engine, still talking to himself. Francis and Antonio followed suit, still chuckling. This was going to be very amusing...they could tell.

[1]=beautiful, correct me if I'm wrong. I used Google Translate for this since I don't speak a lick of Spanish.

So, what did you think of the first chapter/page thingy? Good? Bad? Terrible? I hope that the characters aren't too ooc...^^. Tell me if I messed anything up....and thanks to those who actually read this, there will be more coming out if you want! And remember, consructive criticism is highly appriciated, but compliments are appriciated even more! And don't worry, there will be more of the reader in the chapters coming up! Anywho, byee!

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