character development+a bunch of disorganised ideas

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guys

im kinda dying

BUT NONE OF THE CHARACTERS HAVE GOOD CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT

HOORAY


ok 

i'm sad


sophie: doesnt really learn from her mistakes, is perfect in every way and we can't change that

keefe: made the same stupid mistake back in unlocked (running away to the neverseen and running away from the lost cities)

tam: bro didnt really change after coming back from the neverseen

linh: wait omg she has a character outside of being the stereotypical kawaii asian girl

dex: technology, sensitive, smart character who actually does all the work but is stopped by the amazing talented main character

marella: has a sad backstory but nobody cares about her

stina: her personality is doing fricking pirouettes and i dont like it



the vacker siblings get a separate part because i have a lot to say about them

fitz: IS THE ONLY OTHER CHARACTER WITH A MAJOR FLAW

i am pissed because if his flaw was actually pulled off well he would have been my favourite character. 

but NO

shannon turned his character upside down and shook his brains out

and for one, him killing his brother was justified

well, for me

because a brother who has killed and kidnapped and tortured and destroyed is not a brother. 

and just as the door killed umber

and the rubble killed brant

fitz killed alvar


and remember when he attacked alvar?

to be fair, the council made a terrible decision. 

and nobody cared about it.

because letting a serial killer live with his old family

who were acquainted with those who he had kidnapped

with a device a freaking 14 year old made?????

who in their right mind would actually do that?

and sure, dex is talented

but not a smart idea on behalf of the council.


when fitz attacked alvar biana didnt care

and that brings me to the youngest vacker child.

biana

now when biana gets pushed into a mirror at nightfall

that's a pretty traumatic event

especially for a character like biana

who (very rightfully) was hurt

but guess what

NOBODY.

cared about her

and the story ignored her character development because sophie was off doing some 

perfect stuff


ok

thats it for another episode of my random thoughts with bad line breaks

see you at some unspecified time

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