An egg was sitting with another...
-crack-
The egg started to crack...
-crack-The egg breaks and an Eevee lays there...
Speed:m-mommy? D-daddy?
The Eevee had tears in his eyes...Speed:n-no... don't cry...m-maybe there outside...
Speed walks outside and doesn't find his parents but he does find...something...Speed:huh? What's that?
Speed walks over to the thing he saw...
It was a gray stick with a button...Speed:huh...wonder what this is-
???:AAAAAH!
Speed:HUH?!Speed ran to where he heard the scream and found a fennekin being actacked by a frogadier
Frogadier: Don't even try to scream after all...
No one will hear..."sister"
Speed: HEY!
speed:IF NO BODY WILL HEAR, DOESN'T THAT MAKE YOU A NOBODY, SENSE YOU HEARD HER?!Frogadier:.. doesn't that make YOU a nobody?!
Speed:WELL YEAH, I'M A NOBODY, I JUST HATCHED!
Frogadier:just hatched you say?
Frogadier:well..this should be easy...The frogadier uses hydro pump almost instantly after he said that with speed just barely dodging
Speed:oh boy...Speed then uses swift with the frogadier dodges...
Frogadier:That all you got?
Speed:no..THAT is...
Frogadier:huh?- ACK!The frogadier got hit by the swift coming back...
Speed:you should know that swift always hitsFrogadier:grr...
Frogadier then uses smokescreen and double team
Speed:...(wait for it...)Speed:(NOW!)
speed uses swift to make stars around him, blocking all of the hydro pumps and quick attacks
Frogadier: w-what?Speed:what? Never seen that before?
frogadier:YEAH!
Speed:Well..THAT IS A YOU PROBLEM!Speed then uses swift again... This time...the stars seemed...faster and stronger...maybe delt even more knock-back then normal...
Frogadier:I-...you...YOU LITTLE-
Speed already punched him before he could finish...
Frogadier then passes out...Speed:well then..that was easy...
Fennekin:Whoaaa...THAT WAS AWESOME!
Speed:heh, thanks I guess...
Speed:say...why was he attacking you?
Fennekin:well...that was my...brother...yeah my family kinda likes to hurt me.. although this time...I think he was trying to kill me...
Speed:...WHAT?!
Fennekin:yeah...Speed was just confused...why would a brother even THINK about killing there own sister...
Speed:okay...ya no your coming with me...
Fennekin:huh?
Speed:you ain't going back there...if your brother is like that,I don't wanna even know what your mom and dad are like...Fennekin:T-thanks...
Speed:no problem...Speed:say what's you name?
Fennekin:oh, my name? It's blaze, nice to meet you!
Speed: name's speed nice to meet you too...
And with that, speed and blaze walked off, back to speed's..house...-crack-
Speed and blaze:huh?To be continued...
OKAY THEN!
Chapter 1 is done, this time I think it's pretty good!
And also, speed put the saber inside of your wondering...