Heyo!
Calexis here with an unfinished story that began in 2013, when I was in 6th grade. I was greatly inspired by the series, Maximum Ride by James Patterson. I was young, so this story and the way I wrote it needs a lot of revising.
This is where YOU, the reader comes in. You can tell me what works and what doesn't. What characters to omit, how to avoid making a character a Sue Ellen. I was a cringey kid, so I want to know what to do to avoid a cringe story.
At the end of each chapter I'll put in my own thoughts and ideas on what I can change. You can comment your opinions and I'll answer your comment.
Once I gather enough information to revise what I have, ill make a second draft, so that we can work further into the improvement of these stories.
I really appreciate any interaction with my creations, because I am just starting it as a career. You will be there from the very beginning. And you'll be able to see me grow, because I know I won't flop. It may take a while, but one day my stories will be well known and have their own fandoms.
YOU ARE READING
Dominion draft
Teen FictionAke thought he had seen everything he needed to, being a time traveler. He had it all solved out. He knew how to save every single life of his friends and family. Going to the same time line over and over again, the last thing Ake expected was to cr...
