CHAPTER 1

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by YoungKacey

by YoungKacey

Wednesday,May 14th,1969

This odd ‘fish researcher’ has shown up in town.
I am quite suspicious of him.
He just seemed to show up out of nowhere!
He's also oddly pretty,he's pale and almost deathly skinny,
but in a weirdly pretty way.
he has long hair,its black and really soft looking.
He looks almost annoyed,all the time but when someone
starts talking to him the previous annoyed,serious demeanor wears off.
what I'm trying to say is,he's strangly gorgeous,and apparently

my sisters,Mari and Cassie think so too,as they act lustfully towards him,
its very unlike them.
I have never seen them act so desperate for some guy's attention.
He also seems kind of, how do i say this? Disgusted by them.
It's weird,they're some of the town's beauties!
I mean he gives them attention and smiles when people are looking,
But the minute he thinks no one's watching,he tries not to gag,
Or rolls his eyes, doesn’t every man love having women flock to him?
I think his names Sammie or something,he's only been Here for 4 days,and I hate him.

Sincerely, William Davis

A/N
please give me tips on how to improve my writing,I wrote this very fast and I don't think {because I have a understanding of where this stories going to go} I can accurately judge my work,be as brutal as you can,but please be constructive.Telling me I'm shit wont make my writing better,telling me the flaws within my work and telling me how I can improve,will make my writing better.

Lots of love,
Kacey Emilie {they/it}