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Anna
Midnight. ...Am so tired.Been working since 5 in the morning. Its so dark outside but I have to leave the café spotless or else Tim will fire me. Finally finished cleaning the café I head to the kitchen to clean it up. Suddenly the bell rings indicating that someone has just walked through the front door. Crap I forgot to lock it. A wave of fear swept through me body. This was it I was gonna die. In a café I hadnt clocked 20 years or been married had Kids OMG my life was gonna end. I had the foot steps moving around the cafe .
Sweating I got a broom stick and slowly walked towards the counter maybe I could escape .walking slowly I made it past the counter moving towards the door .I couldn't hear the footsteps Anymore.maybe the person left
Suddenly I heard footsteps behind me. I let it a massive scream and tired to hit the intruder but he dodged it. 'Heyyyyy relax OK' the person said. It was a female voice 'w. ..what ' I asked I was so confused .I couldn't see who it was but but it was definitely a girl probably my age
'Am sorry for scaring you' she said 'but I had to see you'.still confused I asked 'who are you ?' The girl then stepped into the light reviling herself.
Suddenly everything went black.
.....I slowly opened my eyes looking around at my surroundings and realized I was on the café floor. Trying to remember what happened a glass of water was placed in formt of me. I gulped some of it and looked at the person .that is when I remembered
'Please don't pass out again' she said. This girl looked exactly like me in every way. Except for the hair for hers was black. 'W. .who are you' .I asked getting up from the floor. 'Am Emma'she smiled ,'your twin sister'
Hearing this I gulped the water again and took some steps back. 'Look I know its freaky but am your sister I've been looking for you for the past two years'
'Am sorry but your wrong am not your sister ' I said slowly. And turned to live. 'Your in foster care' she said I stopped moving 'am adopted.we were born in the same hospital see' she handled me some papers it was my birth history and hers. 'Your birthday is October 25 same as mine. We look alike Anna we are twins'
This was all too much but I was happy in the inside I had a sister
' OK supposing all this is true and your not completely crazy, what next? 'i said. she smiled' well since your in foster care you can come and live with me and my family ' she said smiling.' Nooooo OK Emma you hardly know me I could be a serial killer or something '
' well are you' she asked. 'of course not'. 'see your not so your coming with me' I nodded my head in disagreement and turned away 'what your parents don't like me?' I said sofly only for my ears
I heard Emma sigh. she moved to me caught my hands. 'Anna look I know they can't not like you, I like you and I know we have just meet but I feel I've known you my entire life. I've looked for you for 2 years and we are finally together Anna. please don't make my trip a waste'
I sighed 'OK am sorry.' Emma smiled and jumped abit 'prefect so tell me where you live and I can start from thea' I gave her my address school and stuff
'OK one more thing, selfie' she got out her very expensive iPhone and we took a picture 'I love it we are so awesome'
she then hugged me and left in a very expensive Mercedes
all this time I kept thinking. what the hell have I gotten myself into.
..... OK there you go chapter 4 is done please comment. I chose selena gomez to be the twins cause she fits my description of them... thank you for those who have read my story.. chapter 5 on its way
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The coven
Mystery / ThrillerTwo girls Ana and Emma's lives are about to change forever.... when they cross paths and discover and unlock selects of their past find love while trying to survive death...