Cullens in camp

This is my first book and I know it is not that good with some mistakes but when I am done with the book I will go back and check it. Please please read it and comment and vote to tell me what I can make better.

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It's the last year of high school before I graduate to college. Me, Alice brandon and rosalie hale my best friends since kindergarden are coming with me to camp paradise. It's an awesome camp that practically lets you do whatever you want but have to participate in a few group activities. The facilities are great. They have a beach, indoor and outdoor swimming pool, a lake, walking trails, a few shops close bye and many other thing that were added in the brochure. It sounds more like a resort than a camp but it's really nice. This year they only excepted 17 - 18 which is why we decided to come. We are all 17 but have our birthdays 2 days apart from each other. I'm born on the 22nd of April Alice on the 24th and rose on the 26. That's one of the reasons we know each other.

~ ON THE CAMP BUS ~

BELLA'S POV

Alice and rose came over to my house earlier today to catch the bus together. It came around 9am and that's where we are now, sitting together on a small mini bus that should take us to camp. Suddenly Alice started shouting " WE'RE HERE" " calm down Alice do you want the whole bus to hear you" me and rose hissed "sorry" she replied although she didn't look like it. I was right though, the whole bus did hear and now they were chatting excitedly to their friends or looking eagerly out the window. Finally the bus came to a stop right in front of the camping ground. It looked amazing. Even better than the brochure. There were about 12 cabins since their were 30 people ( 15 girls and 15 boys ) 3 people in each cabin and one cabin ( number 1 and 2 were spare ). When all the buses arrived it was about 12:30 and a man with blond hair and kind eyes spoke up, he looked like he could be a Movistar instead of running a camp. "he must be the camp director" whispered rose as the man started speaking "I'm carlisle and this is my wife Esme" he said pointing to a woman behind him who looked equally beautiful. "we will be you camp directors for the time that you will stay with us. Breakfast, lunch and dinner will be served in this building behind me and we are going to introduce something we haven't done In all the other years of camp. This will be the first and possibly last time we are introducing activity coaches. It will be a boy and a girl camper who proves to be good in camping and can teach other people while you do your various activities. I will let you know who it is by Wednesday, 3 days from today and I will be looking forward To deciding. If you have any questions feel free to ask either myself or Esme. Your cabin numbers are posted on the doors of cabins and most of all, have fun."

After the welcoming speech everyone dragged of their bags to settle into their cabins. Alice, rosalie And I dragged had about 12 bags together because of Alice. We managed to bring them together with 4 bags each. We all hoped we were together. Suddenly Alice squealed " YAY we are in the same cabin." we were in cabin number 3 . We saw that their were 3 sets of keys on the matt and a note saying if you lose one come to the lunch hall and ask for a new one.

We pushed open the door and turned to look at our room for the next 4 months.

The room was fairly big with a white sofa in the middle, a T.V and cream walls. The furniture in the room were made to match thebeach theme. It was all matching even the fire place.It was beautiful. Two doors were attached to this room one was the massive bed room. It had a double bed for each of us one in each corner. In the remaing corner was a big window and drawer. The beds had a bed side table placed by the side of them. It had all you could want in the room. The other room was the bathroom you you get to if from the bedroom and living room. Once we explored our rooms we unpacked. Rose and I finished and went to help Alice who wasn't even half way through thanks to her shopping obsession. We all decided to mix up our clothes after that. We were practically sisters and always shared everything, like clothes.