Abigail

Chapter One-

I hate driving in the rain. I’m just ready to be home, I’ve had to drive 2 hours to go to my younger brother’s birthday party. He had all his friends there and they were trying to hit on me. My brother and his friends are like nineteen years old, and I am twenty two. Josh, my brother, and my older sister, Katie, who is twenty-five and married, both still live at home and went to college down there. I just got out of college and moved down to New York. That is where I met my boyfriend, we have being going out for two and a half years. My parents have meet him a couple of times.

While driving by the park I spotted a little girl wrapped in a bright pink jacket, I pulled over and ran over to her in the freezing rain. She could be no younger than two years old. When I reached her she had a big bruise under her eye. I didn’t touch her because I didn’t want to scare her away, she had tears running down her face and she had a very pale face and her eyes where bright blue.

“Where is your mama at?” I asked her.

“At home” She had a very soft voice

“Where is your home at?”

…No response

“You can’t take me back to mama, she does bad things to me.”

“What kind-” I got cut off by yelling.

“ABIGAIL WHAT ARE YOU DOING?? GET YOU BUTT BACK HOME NOW!!” I do not know who this woman is, but right beside me, the little girl I think named Abigail, started shaking.

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