I Hate You, New Kid// HIATUS

Author's Note

Hi guys, so a couple of things have been bugging me on this site and I just wanted to address them. Ly guys for reading btw <3 Thank youu.
No biggie, just a couple of 'complaints' :).

First complaint: So I went back and read my book, like, the first couple of chapters and I realized that there are MANY things wrong with it.

a.)I think I made Myra and her life seem TOO perfect. It's annoying even to me - and I wrote it! I mean, she's so smart, beautiful, amazing, everyone worships her because she's some perfect diamond. (Well, little miss Myra can kiss MY perfect *slaps hand over mouth dramatically* ) - ANYWAYS
After reading all about how she has the perfect life, then you move to the later chapters, it might seem weird.
Also, her character is so whiny, annoying, and dramatic- it pisses me off. In a way, she was meant to be like that, but my thirteen year old self overdid it while writing.
(I know I'm still just fourteen but, one year can really change a person :D )
I just want to go back and tweak her personality just a smidge. Nothing much that'll change the book, but just to make it a little less annoying.

b.) My writing style was quite disturbing, and my vocabulary was obviously very restricted, because I repeated words so many times!

c.) THE CHAPTERS WERE WAY TOO SHORT
I need to expand them- I think I'll even combine the first couple of chapters to make it a long interesting one. How can my first chapter be nine pages? Like tf? BANTER.
I really need to make my descriptions better as well because my thirteen year old self OBVIOUSLY had a very narrow mind and couldn't write well.

So don't be alarmed if you go back, and realise the book is all messed up- I'm just going through an editing stage. I want this book to be amazing! I heart my readers, I want you to have the full experience and enjoy my book to the fullest. :)

d.) I have some weird-ass names in the book! I mean, tf is a Quintall? Or a Honey? If that's the case, then I might as well name another character Sugar. Or, maybe Butter. BADUMTSSS. (Anyone? No one? *My5a get off the stage, you're not funny!* Oh, okay, I'll go sit down now)
You catch my drift. Whatever, whatever.

Second: I have 3.76K reads and I love you guys so much for that...but then, I have like 50 votes. Like did you really hate my book that much? Why? What's wrong? If you don't like something about my book, please tell me. I don't mind. But no hateful comments, because I will not waste a minute to report you lol. If you have anything to tell me about my book- complaints, praise lol etc, you can follow me on my twitter @My5aSeriki
I follow back :) Just message me there because I rarely reply private messages on here :P
Criticize constructively. Because my reads to votes ratio is really messed up. Don't be a silent reader. Anyways, thank you guys ily very much. 💖💖 Keep on reading! :)
VOMMENT ;)

-My5aa