Chapter 25 - The Yakuza Massacre of 2014 - Part 3

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Alright, I wish to make one thing expressly clear from here on out. I do not want to hear anything about "originality" or "being original" when it comes to the love interests of MY story. I get that it can be a pet peeve of some people, that much I understand. However, I request that it never be mentioned again. I am writing this story for myself, first and foremost. The only reason why I post it to the sites that I do is that I wish to share my creativity. That is all. If you have an issue when it comes to my "originality" then please, at the very least, keep it to yourself.

I am not saying that to dissuade others from commenting, far from it. However, I take issue when people get annoyed with it. I chose Sayaka as the first character for Jolyne to pursue because I have already preplanned for this to happen. One of the main tags of this story is "Reverse Harem," and "Unwanted Harem," meaning there will be other characters who want her, but she does not want to be romantically involved with.

That, and I think Sayaka was done dirty in THH. Her premature death ruined the chance for her character to be fully explored. By making her close to Jolyne, it gives me the chance to explore her character. If you have a problem with that, and if you want to address it, please do so in a respectful manner.

For the person who commented about my "originality", thank you for bringing it up in a respectful manner. I hope what I put here answers your question as to why I picked her as the first of many love interests.

Also, one more thing: This will be the last chapter of the "Yakuza Massacre" arc. You'll see why that is in a moment...

That being said before we begin my response to reviews/comments....

I have a P-Atr-Eon. Please check it out! The links are all in my bios on Wattpad, FF Dot Net, Ao3, and Qoutev. Just in case, here is the link:

And now, it's time that we jump into my responses reviews/comments!

[Response to Reviews/Comments]

(Qoutev) TACO SENSEI: It was going to happen eventually. The writing was on the wall. But don't fret, she is not dead! As for the Magic show... well.... You'll see.

(Ao3) Emil_Konrad: Seeing as I've already addressed the whole originality thing, I'll tackle the second portion of your question. It is possible for Jolyne to merge over into another faction if she is with someone from a different faction. However, it would be more like an add-on rather than outright replacing her current faction. Think of it as a "partnership" in a way. While she is part of another faction, she can also be a part of her first faction. Though, due to how this chapter plays out, I'm sure you'd understand why that won't be happening anytime soon. I hope this answers your question.

Kolt999: Despair Chiaki is something I live for. Also, Gundham being a badass was just waiting to happen. I mean, I cucked him pretty badly when he first came against Jolyne. Next time... not so much. I can't wait to write that battle. And yes, Jolyne having a self-reflection moment and calling herself out will probably happen a bunch more as we get further into the story. And as I mentioned in the author's note above, Sayaka will be getting more screen time, because her character deserves to be explored.

Funny Fact (Guest): Seeing as you're only on chapter 5, you probably won't see this, but if you somehow manage to blitz to the very end, then I probably don't need to answer this. But, just in case I do; I am VERY aware of the conversion of YEN to the Canadian dollar. I am doing what I'm doing on purpose. Early quests give piss-poor money. That's the point. I am aware that 50,000 YEN would be 366 dollars. I do not want Jolyne to be Omega Rich this early on. That comes later. This is the FIRST WORLD. Stacking her pockets with bands is kinda dumb, and would throw the progression off completely. Besides, if she's in Japan, she should be using YEN, anyway.

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