it's a mahabharat's what if story.
this story is totally based on my imagination.
it's my first story and if there is any mistake please tell me.
English is not my first language so please ignore my writing mistake.
This is the story of a girl who...
Dushla and subhadra both went to garden where the feast was held. when they both entered every one's attention was on both of them their beauty amazed every one. some prince were looking at them with love and some with lust. all brothers saw both of them and Krishna said- subhadra dushla kitni pyaari lag rahi ho tum dono. karn said- ha. then they heard someone saying from behind- ha mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ki ye dono itni sundar hai. they looked behind and saw shishupal standing with a smile. (darshana made him understand why Krishna took his power. he was also like a child to darshana and darshana was like mother to him ) both sister said- bhaiya shishupal and ran to him and hugged him he also hugged them both and asked- kaisi ho tum dono. they both said- hum theek hai. he said- chalo bakiyo se milte hai. they both nodded and went to others and said- pranipaat bhrata he took his all ealders brothers. balram asked- kaise ho shisu. he replied- mai theek hu dau. aap sab kaise ho or revti bhabhi or jiji kaha hai. karn said- hum bhi theek hai. or revti mataon ke sath hai or jiji shayad taiyaar ho rahi hai. all were talking they all heard three voice saying- hume bhul gaye kya tum sab. they saw sharad( shakuni's son), purab and vibhav (vidur's son). duryodhan said- tum dramebaazo ko koi nahi bhul sakta hai. Karn said- tum sab yaha? sharad tum gandhar se kab aaye or purab, vibhav tum dono ki shiksha purn ho gai. sharad said- bas thodi der pahle aya bhaiya. purab said- hamari shiksha bhi aaj hi purn hui hai. they again heared someone saying- hum bhi hai. they saw rukmi (vidarbha yuraaj) and vijay (Salya's son). balram asked- lagta hai aaj sab yaha aa jayenge or rukmini or Vijaya kaha hai. rukmi said- bhrata vo dono mataon ke sath hai or sabhi yaha nahi aayenge aaj per bhrata Vikram bhrata dhruv or bhrata dhairya bhi nhi aaye unhone ne kaha tha ki aayenge per abhi tak nahi aaye hai. kisne kaha hum nahi aye. they heard someone and looked behind and saw trio standing. they came and took blessings from elder brothers. arjun said- lagta hai aaj jiji bahut pareshan hone wali hai. shubhadra said- are nahi hum to bhul hi gye jiji ne aap sab se kehne ko kaha tha ki aap sab koi badmashi mat kare. then dushla said- ab sab yaha ho toh batao hame hum dono kaise lag rahe hai. rukmi asked- jiji ne taiyaar kiya hai na tum dono ko. they both nodded. Then a arrogant princess who had everything over like over jwellery, over dress came to them and said- tabhi toh kuch mel hi nahi hai kapdo ka or gehnon ka lagata hai tumhari jiji ke sirf naam bade darshan chote hai kuch pata hi nahi hai. no one laughed but all feel pity on her and all brothers and all sisters including who were coming towards them (revti, vrushali, devika, bhanumati, valandhara, rukmini, karenumati, Vijaya, ) were totally red of anger but darshana taught them never insult anyone without a big reason. dushla said- raajkumari humne na hi apse pucha hai or na hi hume aap ki salah ki jaroorat hai or ha humari jiji baki raajkumari ki tarah nahi hai jo sirf dikhane ke liye saare ke saare gahne pehan aaye vo ek sachi rani jo janti hai ki unhe kaise rehna hai or apne behanon or bhaiyon ko kaise rehna hai ye bhi sikhaya hai isiliye app ab bhi yaha khadi hai varna hum jiji ka apman karne walon ko hum kabhi maaf nahi karte hai. valandhara said in very sweet tone to the princess- ab aap jaa rahi hai ya or bejjati karwani hai. she went away from there and all started to laugh. all laughing and talking to each other then duryodhan said- jiji janti hai bandariyo ko sundar kaise banate hai kyo dushla or bhadra. all bursted out laughing ex Shala and bhadra they both huffed and said- bhaiya jiji ye bhi janti hai ki insaano ko murga kaise banate hai. all laughed and started to tease eachother then a prince came towards dushala and said- pranipaat raajkumari. while checking her head to toe with lust. dushla said- pranipaat raajkumar. she felt uncomfortable under his gaze. all brothers and sisters noticed that and got angry then raajkumar said- aap bahut sunder hai raajkumari dushala. dushla said- mujhe pata hai per aapko ek baat nahi pata jante hai kya. he asked- kya. she said- jiji ne sabhi behno ko kaha hai agar tumhe koi pareshan kare to tum uska jo chahe vo kar sakti ho vo koi bhi ho baki jiji sambhal lengi. he got scared then subhadra said- ab aap ja sakte hai. balram said- tum sab raajkumariyan baki Rajkumariyon ki tarah nahi ho. revti said- arya, jiji ne ham sab ko ek yodha banaya hai. vrushali said- ha dau vo kehti hai kabhi kisi ka jivan asan nahi hota hai sabhi paristhitiyo ke liye taiyaar rehna chahiye. devika said- isiliye humne yudh ka shikshan bhi liya hai. rukmi asked- ab koi ye bhi batao ki jiji hai kahan kitna samay ho gaya hai. purab said- vo dekho. he pointed towards darshana vo devi kon hai. karn smacked his head and said- budhu vo jiji hai. darshana's side after they both left- darshana took bath for half an hour and got ready. Darshan's dress-
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she doesn't like jwellery so she only wore simple jwellery. after getting ready she went to the feast. she entered as a queen all prince were looking at her with respect and princess were looking with jealousy thinking how could someone looked so beautiful in simple sharee.
