Kuvaru no Akuma

1. The Scarlet Eyes

Hey everyone wellie is my first story and im hoping to see how it's is. I hope you guys enjoy my book and take it easy on me ^_^ so with out further interference.
Enjoy!!!!!!
[ Gira walks in the cold dark house barefooted, and stumbles as he follows the trail of blood trough the hallway. His vision blurry and body is full of fatigue]
"Mom"!!, I screams.
"Mom, Where. Are you ?"
[ At the end of the blood trail, he came upon a room an peaked inside opening the door slowly. With the door fully open Gira saw his mother torn up corpse, covered with multiple claw wounds and her intestines hanging outside the body. Her body look almost drowned in a puddle of blood .]
"M.mm.mom", I choke out.
< seeing my mother in that state was suffocating. My heart felt like it was ring ripped out of my chest over and over again. I look next to my mother's body and there was something truly horrifying. It had was to dark to see what it was, but I will never forget those piercing scarlet eyes that seems to mock me where ever I go.>
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"Gira, Gira," Ms. Shiyo snaps.
[he wakes up from his daydream]
"Can you give us the answer to this problem?"
[gets up half heartedly but still manages to the answer the long math equation in under a minute, which amazes everyone especially the girls who idolizes him.]
"Thank you"
[he return to his seat]
" the fuck you spacing out for you've been doing this frequently lately", snaps Kasume.
"Nothing just tired that's all"
< Its been 9 years since that incident. Mom I vow I will find and execute your killer>
" I know what will wake you up"[he grins and pulls out photos of girls panties he took around school and shows them with sparkling eyes]
"I have all colors and this one of the class president is a limited edition."
[nasty stares erupt across the room towards him]
"You damn pervert", exclaims Gira.
"And don't you forget it
[smiles]
[Gira signs]
"You never learn"
"women are my life dammit." "I eat sleep and dream all for women" [he lets his imagination run while.]
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[ Anami runs up and holds Gira's right arm]
"Gira [sweetens up her voice to sound cute] "Do you want to go to the movies with me?"
"Maybe some other time I have plans tonight."
"dude the hell your problem turning her down"[looks shocked] "Don't tell me your going the other way ", gasps kasume.[faints as his soul leaves his body]
"I'm busy tonight just something I have to do. [he looks up to to kasume chasing after Anami]
"A-na-mi chan" [floats towards her with his lips puckered up] "I'll go to the movies with you." [Anami slams him into the ground with her bag]
"Fuck off you pervert" [walks away with her group of friends]
[Gira deep in thought while walking home]
< After mom died it's just been been my dad an sister and I living together. My dad is always away due to work and to be honest I don't really know what he does. I search the streets at night about twice a week trying to find the thing that murdered my mom and most were in vain> *****************************************************
Dad, Kyroni im home[ Gira walks in the kitchen and sees a note on the fridge saying food is in the oven]
"Onii-chan I want food"
"Theres some in oven"
[kyroni pouts] " we both know dad can't cook"[starts rolling on the floor] " I want food food food"
"Fine I'll order pizza [looks at the remaining $20 in his wallet.
[after a while]
[puts on a coat and decides to go out and search for that thing again]
< There have been many reports of unknown things attacking humans and killing them. Many say they are demons or The god's wrath but I believe that's a load of bullshit.>
"AHHHHHHHHHHH STAY AWAY"
< the screams seems to coming from the ally I ran and peaked my head around the corner. The scene that was going down froze me in my tracks I seen this creature with a wide scaly face And large razor teeth. This thing had the body shape of a human except with more brownish skin and extremely large claws covered in his victims blood. The tail swaying side to side with a pointy sharp end and those scarlet eyes came back hunting me again. I watch as he tear up and eats his victim limb by limb. Im a coward why can't I move?> [gira ends up tearing up and pissing himself out of fear trying to say hidden. The creature looks over in his direction and his heartbeat rose at a rapid pace. The demon stood and jump on the building and left.]
"FFFUUUUUCCCCCKKKKK, why am I so powerless." [he beats the walls with his hand]
"I WANT TO DESTROY THEM ALL"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope U guys enjoy the first chapter I'll b uploading every saturday :) thanks for reading