The Detector

chap 1

There was a young detective who was placed on a case that had involved the most terrifying act ever and that would be his own sisters death. The young detective was named James William and he was only 20 years old who had a terrible past involving a terrible alcoholic abusive father and drug addict mother. Through out his life he was the punching bag and protector of his young sister Emily and today 3/21/1954 at 10:40 he gains news that she had past in a terrible way and that he is the one to investigate the case. That night he talked with his coworkers Jerry and Maze.

Jerry: So, what is the verdict to the case

Maze: Jerry stops we are here to help James get over his sisters death.

James: no dont worry about that maze, yes, my sister was the only family I had but I am fine and jerry to answer you the verdict is that she was murdered with potential.

Jerry: see maze it is fine

Maze: whatever, so then James how do you figured she had been murdered

James pulls out the pictures of the crime scene and shows them Emilys dead beaten body laying with a several stab wounds to the neck, chest, arms, and legs in only places that could not cause to much damage to the human body and then he point to a gunshot that was missed in the whole case and the shot was right in her women hood. Which in that way would cause a complete death and many investigators would miss it.

Jerry: What the fuck who in the right mind would shoot a girl in their private parts?

Maze: That sick fuck Im worried to know what else he did to her before he finally killed her

James smiles to himself and quickly goes to a sad straight face before replying to his friend coworkers and he tried to make his voice seem shaken and mad.

James: The killer raped her with his gun and other foreign objects which cause her insides to rip apart and cause internal bleeding while he had her tied down and gaged with a very slow killing poison. Also the killer stole some blood and if you look closer youll see that her stomach was blown up by some Ammonium Nitrate.