The Beginning - Part 1

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Hello guys, this is my first attempt at writing a story. Hope you guys like it. Please suggest any changes that I should keep in mind for my future stories. Also, give me ideas for the next story. This story will be completed in 4 parts. Here is the 1st part. Please leave lots of comments on this story. And disclaimer, this story is for fictional purposes, please don't take it to heart or get offended, just enjoy it as a normal story.

Finally, let's begin ....

Bigg Boss had ended, and our Shiv and Nimrit met for the first time outside that mad house at Farah Khan's party. Assume Shiv had already realized his love for Nimrit, but she just considered him as her best friend. They were dancing and teasing each other as usual and were basically having a good time together.

That's when Fahmaan and Shalin entered the party, which kind of put a damper on Shiv's mood. He never liked the bonding Nimrit and Shalin shared and on top of that, there was Fahmaan, who Nimrit thought was extremely hot. It took Shiv back to the day when Fahmaan had entered the Bigg Boss house as a wild card contestant. All the girls were fawning at his good looks including Nimrit which made him mad. He remembered Nimrit telling them how Fahmaan was way hotter than Shalin and how hot he looked in just a towel, which had made him feel extremely jealous. All these Shiv's thoughts were interrupted when he heard Abdu saying," Ohhh bro Shiv, look Saman's here!!!" and he was snapped back to reality.

He greeted both with a heavy heart and looked at Nimrit, who was welcoming them with a warm hug which again made him feel a twinge of jealousy. He knew that she just considered him a friend and his feelings were one-sided, so he decided to maintain some distance from her. Because he was afraid that his feelings for her might come between their friendship as well and spoil the beautiful bonding they share. So, he went to one corner of the terrace and gloomily stared over the city while his thoughts were racing in a different direction altogether. Stan saw him standing alone and came over to talk to him.

Stan – Bhai kyaa kar raha tu idhar akele me? Aise sadme me kyuu khada hai?

Shiv – Kuch nahi re, bass aise hi. Mann nahi lag raha tha, he said while looking at Nimrit who was having a blast with Fahmaan.

Stan looked in that direction and instantly understood the problem.

Stan – Accha, kuch nahi kyaa re. Par merko toh jalne ki bu aa rahi hai baaju se, he said while controlling his laughter. Itna tension kay ko leta re tu, vo toh bass naach rahi hai, usme kyuu jal rahi hai teri. Tum dono ko ek dusre ke liye feelings hai ye hum sabko pata hai re bro. Hume toh lag raha tha ki BB ke ghar me tumhe kuch drama nahi karna tha isliye vaha openly feelings bol nahi paa rahe honge, par mujhe toh guarantee tha ki bahar aake tumlog kaa kuch scene chalu hoga, nahi kyaa bro?

Shiv – Aisa kuch nahi hai re MC. Usne toh BB ke baad harr interview me bola hai ki Shiv is not my type and I'll not date him in a million years, he said with extreme sadness in his eyes. Aur usne toh ek interview me ye bhi bola ki uska koi boyfriend hai 2.5 years se aur tu bol raha hai ki vo mujhse pyaar karti hai.

Stan – Kyaa yed bhaga raha reh tu Shiv. Vo interview me aise nahi bolegi toh kyaa directly bolegi tere se pyaar karti karke. Aur vo boyfriend wali baat toh bass Abdu ke liye boli thi, taaki vo move on kar sake, ye baat toh tereko bhi pata hai. Kyaa choti si baat pe trip kar raha re tu Shiv. Tereko fir bhi doubt ho raha toh apni behena Sumbul ko puchte hai, usko sab khabre pata rehti.

Stan calls Sumbul over.

Sumbul – Kyaa re, kyuu bulaya mujhe?

Stan – Mereko bata Nimrit kaa koi boyfriend hai kyaa re? Vo abhi ek interview me boli 2.5 years se date kar rahi karke?

Sumbul – Nahi toh, vo bass Abdu ke liye boli vaise. Vo last uske co-star Shantanu ko date kar rahi thi. Par choti sarrdaarni khatam hote time they broke up. But they are still very good friends. Infact Nimrit mujhe ab thode time pehle bata rahi thi ki vo Delhi se aaya hai Mumbai, toh kal vo log brunch ke liye milne wale hai.

After listening to this, Shiv felt as if someone stabbed his heart with a knife.

Shiv – Par Namya ne mujhe kyuu nahi bola ye?

Sumbul – Tujhe kyuu bolegi vo harr baat, tu uska boyfriend thodi hai. And saying that she left to enjoy the party.

Stan – Jaan, tu iski baat dil pe mat le re. Vo bass dost ko milne jaa rahi hai kal. Usko koi feelings nahi hai ab vo Shantanu ke liye. Aur mereko ek baat bata, vo tereko sirf "dost" maanti toh itna possessive thodi hoti. Kaunse "dost" itne possessive rehte re? Aur Nimmi ko side me rakh, mereko bata tu toh pyaar karta naa use?

Shiv – Haa re, he said while blushing badly. I wish vo bhi karti ho, par ....

Stan – Par bir kuch nahi re, tension lene kaa nahi re dena hota hai yede. Ek kaam karte hai kal shaamko mere ghar aa, 2 din baad Colors ki official party hai, usme teri Namya ko kaise patane kaa uska mast kuch planning karte hai.

The rest of the night passed quite uneventfully. Nimrit enjoyed the party as she was completely oblivious to Shiv's feelings for her. But she was going to realize her feelings for him soon enough ....

Guys, this is it for part 1. Let me know what you thought about it. I'll update part 2 very soon. Also, I tried writing Stan's part in his slang but failed miserably, so please forgive me for it. Hopefully, I'll get better with time. Please suggest if any changes are required. And give ideas for the next stories.

Till then, khup saara prem, Ganpati Bappa Moryaa!!

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