The Gator and The Bear ❤️❤️

*~ A/N (#1) ~*

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Heyaaaa!! 😁

I was literally listening to Summer Walker and SZA while writing this A/N. (THEIR VOICES ARE SO FUCKING HOTTTTTT)

Anyways! Before I do this A/N, I have something I wanna say:

So, there are few things I really felt like pointing out, because I seem comfortable saying on here, which is

I realized when I make like chapters, I ALWAYS make story's plot go by SUPER QUICK and it'll only be chapter one!!

Example:

Monty and Freddy are really bad enemies and hate each other so much. But, then, the two make up by having a nice talk and now they have feelings for each in chapter three and then get together in chapter two.

SEE WHAT I MEAN?! It was also in my first story that I wrote up here and it ended up happening in ALL my other stories that I tried to write and finish! And I never finish them..😔

SO! I'VE DECIDED TO TAKE ACTION! 😝 During a...LONGGG break, I read many "How to write good stories", so I could try to write better!

Of course I even read some "How to write smut" stories because why the fuck not? Anyhow, that's number one of my writing problem!

Now, this is just a small thing, but what I've also noticed about my writing is that I ALWAYS REPEAT! It's just something I should NEVER do. That's even saying to anyone that really repeats shit when writing.

Example:

"Wow! Those are some really nice shoes, Roxy," Chica said.

"Thanks, babe," Roxy said.

"Heh, you're welcome," Chica said.

Notice how I kept repeating the word 'said'? Well, yeah, that's what repeating is. I've read not one, not two, but THREE WEBSITES that tell me what to say besides the common word 'said'.

But, I've also tried not to repeat many other words when writing. So, I'm now just going to start by asking Google synonyms of words that I might repeat; that way I have many other ways to say what I want to say.

Another thing that I figured out was missing from my chapters was being describable. I obviously can not describe a SINGLE thing and I bet I make people very pissed off and confused!

What I SHOULD fucking do:

Monty made his way up to Monty Golf to calm himself down. Every time he would go to his attraction, he would go to the catwalk, which is also where a past incident happened.

Monty never thought to ask what happened, however his mind was always very curious. But, for now wasn't the time to think about an old problem, the gator really needed to stop being so heated over nothing.

Now, doesn't that look AMAZING?!

No? Well, I don't care. /j

Here's something I know that I'm never going to fucking do, but who really gives a shit? I know I don't.

Last thing I think I need to work on is making a character's POV also seem describable. As in telling what one is wearing or how they act or look like, just to give you guys a nice clear view of that one character.

Example #1 (We're gonna use Freddy's POV for this[I hate this example but it works..I think]):

I stood in complete silence and started blushing like crazy! Monty looked even better then what he usually would look like.