Short stories about you!

Chrissy K.

Hey guys this is the first short story about a girl named Chrissy. Give me some feedback!

In the land of America and Earth in a city and a town, there was a cry. A cry of a hero. In a cabin in the woods, a mother that was deserted by her husband. She pushed and pushed and the beautiful baby girl came out.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~13 years later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The beautiful girl grew up in poverty in the year of 1894 and without a lot of support and help from people around her. she basically had a really rough life. She grew up to look exteremly gorous. When she would go into town and three ladies oler than dirt would say, "she looks like a girl from the gods." and then chuckle. But all the other towns people would scoff and spit on her because she had ADHD and dyslexia.

After a day of being spit on and swore at she started to walk home to get ready for the night, everyday was the same, but today was different. She knew it, she could feel it in her veins. Chrissy didn't really like the feelings of uncertainty, so she took the long route home so she could shake off the eerie feeling. When she was anbout 20 feet away from home she heard a noise, then a scream, the noise got louder, then everything went black.

Chrissy woke up in a room with a kind face looking all around her. Everything looked so new and crisp and clean. She saw a kid with curly hair and grease all over his face. "She woke up guys come over here!!" About time said a stranger. She sat up very confused and I saud," WHERE THE HELL AM I! WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?! AND WHY AM I NOT AT HOME!!!" After that tantrum she fainted because she used so much energy.

She woke up again. The greasey guy said, " Don't yell again please, you scared the crap out of me." Someone else said, "literally" Chrissy said, " fine then give me some answers. And some food." The greasy guy laughed and said, " Sure, Oh and my name's Leo." I smiled and sat up and took all of my surroundings in.

Leo came back in about 5 minutes, gave me some food, and started to tell me what's going on. Leo started to talk. " Well first of all if you don't remember you are a half blood-" Chrissy cut him off, " What is a half blood?" Leo started up again," Well since you don't know, you are half human, your mom, and half god, your dad is..." "Who is my DAD!" Chrissy screamed. "Well he is Ares. Some other information you may want to know is well, what year do you think it is?"

"Umm, I think it is 1894.. Why do you ask?" Chrissy asked.

" Well your wrong it is 2015. I've been told you've been asleep for around 100 years. I'm gonna leave now to let you process this" He said

"No its OK I'm fine. Just let me out of this place." She said.

"You are suppose to stay here for the rest of the day." He said.

"OK.Bye."

~~~~~The next day~~~~~~

Chrissy woke up with energy and she felt happy for once. She was itching to go for a run because she is hyperactive. Chrissy was also very curious about what was going on. She was determined to get answers. She wanted to know who she was and why she was here maybe she can even be a hero. She wandered around camp until a giant centar that looks like he has a lot of power in this camp wanted to talk to her and escort her to where she needed to be her well cabin she said. She belonged in the areas cabin with other areas demigods she was a really really excited to see her what did they say demigod people no there family then. So the Saints are escorted her to her cabin and she got settled in with the nothingness she had. She met her other cabinets and they seemed alright they like that there is a new person but we made sure that she knows where she was on the food chain. Basically for the first full day of her being alive and well camp she ran around and meet new people there was a kid named what was it Percy Jackson I think Percy Jackson yeah apparently he was a friend of Leo's. She knew that she was going to like it here and she was really excited to stay here but she was still questioning what happened I'll come next day when she blacked out and then stopped living for a hundred years she went out and look for that Sentaro where he lived so she can get some answers and what happened and why she's here now.

~~~~~~~~~~~~the next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I will publish the next part of this story tommorow..